Poem -
For better for worse
I think the bubble burst my dear. A love so strong for many years, is now so jaded worn and grey i carnt recall a happy day.
I think we missed a step my sweet. You Lie there texting while i sleep a secret that you choose to keep with each message sent my poor heart weeps.
I think we missed the boat my girl we watched our married life unfurl along the way the rot got in and burrowed deep beneath our skin.
I think we dropped the ball my love a marriage blessed by god above, now feels like some satanic curse there was no better only worse !
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Oh My Goodness!!...... what a truly sad and powerfully moving piece of poetic truth that goes beyond compelling...... it reads like a love letter of pure 'Letting Go'....... a testimony to tragedy and the final stage of love's painful recognition of its own death ~
~ "You lie there texting while I sleep
A secret that you choose to keep
With each message sent
My poor heart weeps..."
Those lines nearly had me in tears.....I can't help thinking that MAYBE this is just a fiction..... but somehow I sense it is true...... regardless, it is one the most moving writes I've read in some time!!......ALL STARS!! & PINNED!!.......I have said a simple prayer......I couldn't help it DAVID!!...... Lots of Love!!.......T xo ?✴❤
Hello Tony
Thank you so much for your kind words it realy makes a difference hearing them from such a talented poet.Your right you have to live it to write it !
Thanks again
David
Awesome and vastly underrated! Such a way with words you have and a talent of the sombre write. Very well done.