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Forever

Your mask falls off, I see your face
I shake my head in sheer disgrace
I know you'll never let me go
Your not the man I use to know
The game of chase is half your fun
The gunshot sounds, the games begun
Escape your love, I never will
Hide and seek your only thrill
Run and hide to get away
Three steps behind you always stay
On this journey I embark
Lost in these shadows of the dark
Shadows sway from side to side
There's no place left for me to hide
You'll find me, you always do
My nightmares are becoming true
There's no escape, I finally see
You never will set me free

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Dean Kuch

[Your] You're not the man I [use] used to know ... Just a couple of misspellings here, Scarlet. The line indicated the contraction of "you are". Hence, "You're" needs to be used in this instance...
Good aabb rhyme scheme throughout and the message this conveys is crystal clear.
Nice writing,
~Dean Kuch
 

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Scarlet Ann

Thank you for the feedback, I'll definitely be more careful next time and thank you for your thoughts. 

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Dean Kuch

You're very welcome, Scarlet. Keep up the grrrrrrrreat writing.
~Dean :)

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