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Freeplex Poem - In Dreams I Fantasize
Dreams saturated in fallen starsÂ
As I dance in this secret gardenÂ
As I dance in this secret gardenÂ
My thoughts become answered wishes
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One for love, one for peace, and my answered wishesÂ
Are the catalyst that will send me to you
Because my fantasy is for others to be happy, to you
I want to be your deepest dream come trueÂ
As I walk across every field of a different seasonÂ
Kicking the red leaves before ice is crunching beneath my boots
And each berry I try has a chocolate filling Â
As I enjoy every sensation of this dream worldÂ
I have my love, and I have my peace, and I have you now,
As I imagine your visage standing there.
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Note: I combined duplex and free verse poetry. The first 7 lines are Duplex and the last 7 lines are free verse. I did this because duplex feels too restrictive for my liking but I do like the idea of it, so I decided to combine the two styles to give myself more freedom to explore my idea of fantasy.
Love how you have played around with the two forms here. Sometimes the rigidity of form works well but sometimes free verse is what is needed.
Thank you so much. I just think it is important to try different structures and expand creatively.Â
love dreams, gardens and your poem!........................................................Jim
Thank you kindly <3
Love this poem. The first lines really drew me in and the rest of the poem was well written so that it kept my attention. Lots of emotion in this that you did really well to express x
Thank you kindly, I wanted to convey the emotion well and pull the reader into that world. I'm so glad that it had an impact on you :)