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FROM A DISTANCE

FROM A DISTANCE

God is waching us all and including Elon Musk,
there is no escape anywhere from dawn to dusk,
the non-believers are illiterate and inconsiderate,
more dismissive and just think that heaven can wait.

We'll let you live if you show you have something to give,
I was reprimanded not knowing that it's accumalative,
just all stacked up and waiting for recogniton, fruition,
then you realised it was too late in your poor condition.

Lying in your bed and wondering where it all went wrong,
there's a message if you care to listen, just like the song;
I used to draw nice perspectives with vanishing points,
perhaps with a little more concession, then God annoints.

From a distance this world of ours just looks blue and green,
ready to envelop many doubters the last time they were seen.  

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sparrowsong

Hello Terry...

There's a certain Mystery wouldn't you say when you take the Path that is so less traveled?

Where flowers can stand tall...

No traffic...

Nothing trampled on...

Nothing ruined by the uncaring...

What that must do to a Soul?

Great write!

Thank you for sharing...

sparrowsong
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Terry Reeves

Hi Sparrow,
Thanks so much,
love,
Terry.
xoxo :)

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