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THE GIVEN

THE GIVEN

Gasp in the greatness of a given
while I donate my breath
and unsheathe my bated tongue
I meant no harm within this magnificence
A forbidden entrance scarred an epitaph
well before words were manufactured
and there, those fractured voices
dwell in doubt, unable to shout
about the factual moment of  independence
Remaining among the ancients are some
the fine printed, upon dotted line remnants
The shreds of balance whom spare
mere mortal meanings of the humans being
left to gasp in the greatness of a given.

Carey Milton ©

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Hi Carey Milton,

Good write, thanks for sharing, my applause, my love, my five stars

I meant no harm within this magnificence
A forbidden entrance scarred an epitaph
well before words were manufactured
and there, those fractured voices
dwell in doubt, unable to shout
about the factual moment of  independence

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Hi Carey Milton,

Good write, thanks for sharing, my applause, my love, my five stars

I meant no harm within this magnificence
A forbidden entrance scarred an epitaph
well before words were manufactured
and there, those fractured voices
dwell in doubt, unable to shout
about the factual moment of  independence

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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Carey Milton

My thanks Mr Willy :)

Tried a little non rhyme
that flowed just fine!
LOL

Carey xo

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Curious Onlooker

Amazing, fluid and flowing..you didn't miss a beat 5* and a fav this was more than a pleasure to read, among the most interesting and intriguing
CO

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Carey Milton

My deepest and most sincere thanks for reading something that literally flowed from mind to pen to paper within minutes... I made contact me thinks :)

xo

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