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Golgotha

Golgotha

Whether passion's been stifled or the cycles still spiral
Embedded deep is the knowledge that nothing matters
And once realised, you'll indulge not desires of swine
But instead calmy tread, so as blood will not shed
Omitting where you wash in the lamb at the altar

But what reprimands our humanity is in itself the key
A paradox of freedom, necessitating opposition to reason
When we flourish through selfishness and tribulation to see

But if ego and ignorance should soar
Then longer will be the road
That guides you back home to meย 

The more you are known
The more you exist in vain
And the more you seek but will never own
The less you will truly gain
And one who fears to depreciate himselfย 
Will never understand the silhouette that is
The eminence of one who self-deprecatesย 
And what is status or statureย 
But a label on a leash
For you to enter your field to graze

And I have forgotten who I amย 
To know what it is to find oneselfย 
Just like you slumber and travailย 
Before the river consecrates your weary head

Still, can you feel the water warm
When you see the dove descend
Can you remain alone as one
As you dare to look within yourself
And when you hear the voice of God
You will bridge heaven to the earth

So be craven not to sacrifice
What was never your existent self
As you awaken to clamber the path of mortality
Permitting the world to persecute through you
What can never be found from the fear of death

Scourged skin caresses the stipe
As he uplifts himself to breatheย 
Transcending the transom reflecting man's horizonย 
As consciousness crowns the skull
Too dense, and much too heavy for a king

For the vacant tomb unveils, one who has overcomeย 
The flesh of the earth and all its death
For one raised will not return

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Ian William

Thank you Poetess, that means so much coming from you. Your every word is poetic with the rhythm of every line measured so perfectly well.

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Marion

Thought provoking Ian...Great write x

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Ian William

Thank you very much Marion. I greatly appreciate it.

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Lorna

Hello Ian,ย 
You have an interesting style, I really enjoyed this

"As consciousness crowns the skull
Too dense, and much too heavy for a king"

this image is fantastic, looking forward to reading more
Lorna x
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Ian William

Thank you very much Lorna. Glad you liked it.

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Brittany Schluter

I thought I probably missed some Ian stuff while I was away.๐Ÿ™‚
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Your work resonates a kind of energy and intensity that I like to think I understand, though I can never be sure. I love the richness of meaning and mystery in your lines. Also the vindication you bring to humility. An undervalued trait in my experience/opinion.

This one challenged me, which I like. It is in my head now making the wheels turn. Wonderful writing ๐Ÿ‘ย 

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Ian William

Thank you ever so much Brittany. I appreciate your feedback. Your compliments are reflected in how I view your work.

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Bernadete van d...

Intense, brilliant & thought provoking. Like all your writings.ย 
Greetings, Bernadeteย 
P.S ย  More pages please.ย 

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Ian William

Thank you so much my friend.ย  I will sift through your work soon. I will write another poem, especially when you leave such beautiful comments.ย 

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Bernadete van d...

Good! Looking forward to your poem, it has been a while, Ian. Iโ€™ll write another one tomorrow, too busy today, big Monday here in NZ. Good to be ahead of the the world, we see Mondays before everyone else. Not!!! Ha,ha.ย 
P.S. Tomorrow you write one & I โœ๏ธ one.ย 

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Ian William

Absolutely Bernadette. It may take a few days, I'll try to get the time. But I will,ย  my friend.ย 

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Simon Bromley

It has been a while my friend, but your work hasn't faltered.ย  I have been through some changes in my life and haven't really had the time to write, but the urge never fades and I'm glad I came back to read thisย 

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Ian William

Thank you so much Simon. I sincerely appreciate it. Great to see you are writing when you get the opportunity.ย 

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Poetic Cries

To read poetry that gives me depth of perspective and reflection just amazing!ย 

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Ian William

Thank you so much Charles. I greatly appreciate you taking the time to read itย 

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Being Me

I am enjoying reading your work! You are an extremely talented and gifted writer x

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Ian William

Tina, you're breaking my heart here. Thank you so much my friend.ย 

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