Golgotha

Whether passion's been stifled or the cycles still spiral
Embedded deep is the knowledge that nothing matters
And once realised, you'll indulge not desires of swine
But instead calmy tread, so as blood will not shed
Omitting where you wash in the lamb at the altar
But what reprimands our humanity is in itself the key
A paradox of freedom, necessitating opposition to reason
When we flourish through selfishness and tribulation to see
But if ego and ignorance should soar
Then longer will be the road
That guides you back home to meย
The more you are known
The more you exist in vain
And the more you seek but will never own
The less you will truly gain
And one who fears to depreciate himselfย
Will never understand the silhouette that is
The eminence of one who self-deprecatesย
And what is status or statureย
But a label on a leash
For you to enter your field to graze
And I have forgotten who I amย
To know what it is to find oneselfย
Just like you slumber and travailย
Before the river consecrates your weary head
Still, can you feel the water warm
When you see the dove descend
Can you remain alone as one
As you dare to look within yourself
And when you hear the voice of God
You will bridge heaven to the earth
So be craven not to sacrifice
What was never your existent self
As you awaken to clamber the path of mortality
Permitting the world to persecute through you
What can never be found from the fear of death
Scourged skin caresses the stipe
As he uplifts himself to breatheย
Transcending the transom reflecting man's horizonย
As consciousness crowns the skull
Too dense, and much too heavy for a king
For the vacant tomb unveils, one who has overcomeย
The flesh of the earth and all its death
For one raised will not return
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you have a wonderful matter for which you write. I like the elegancy.
Thank you Poetess, that means so much coming from you. Your every word is poetic with the rhythm of every line measured so perfectly well.
Thought provoking Ian...Great write x
Thank you very much Marion. I greatly appreciate it.
Hello Ian,ย
You have an interesting style, I really enjoyed this
"As consciousness crowns the skull
Too dense, and much too heavy for a king"
this image is fantastic, looking forward to reading more
Lorna x
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Thank you very much Lorna. Glad you liked it.
I thought I probably missed some Ian stuff while I was away.๐
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Your work resonates a kind of energy and intensity that I like to think I understand, though I can never be sure. I love the richness of meaning and mystery in your lines. Also the vindication you bring to humility. An undervalued trait in my experience/opinion.
This one challenged me, which I like. It is in my head now making the wheels turn. Wonderful writing ๐ย
Thank you ever so much Brittany. I appreciate your feedback. Your compliments are reflected in how I view your work.
Intense, brilliant & thought provoking. Like all your writings.ย
Greetings, Bernadeteย
P.S ย More pages please.ย
Thank you so much my friend.ย I will sift through your work soon. I will write another poem, especially when you leave such beautiful comments.ย
Good! Looking forward to your poem, it has been a while, Ian. Iโll write another one tomorrow, too busy today, big Monday here in NZ. Good to be ahead of the the world, we see Mondays before everyone else. Not!!! Ha,ha.ย
P.S. Tomorrow you write one & I โ๏ธ one.ย
Absolutely Bernadette. It may take a few days, I'll try to get the time. But I will,ย my friend.ย
It has been a while my friend, but your work hasn't faltered.ย I have been through some changes in my life and haven't really had the time to write, but the urge never fades and I'm glad I came back to read thisย
Thank you so much Simon. I sincerely appreciate it. Great to see you are writing when you get the opportunity.ย
To read poetry that gives me depth of perspective and reflection just amazing!ย
Thank you so much Charles. I greatly appreciate you taking the time to read itย
I am enjoying reading your work! You are an extremely talented and gifted writer x
Tina, you're breaking my heart here. Thank you so much my friend.ย