Poem -
Grief...
Her mind bird said to herself,
Never cry in a state of misery,
The frozen wind crept on above,
The river flows unknowingly.
There was no leaf on the tree,
No flower upon her cheeks.
And little motion in the air,
Only the ocean wave's sound!
The sky is vast like your face,
There was no beauty spotted,
Only the lips tremble in grief,
Only the tear- drops in eyes!
BY
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
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Comments
WOW this is truly a masterpiece..really moved by these lines William. The imagery of deep sorrows were felt while reading these lines.Love it..my applause and high five..plus this one to my favourite..you know you are one of that type of human who reviews work of people without expecting same.And feel blessed to have you as my good friend ..
Thnxxx William for being so kind to all of us..
love
Piusha
bothered whether they will review yo
Piusha,
Message incomplete ???
WILLIAMS .G.
Sorry about that it was just an error..I typed erased but I was not able to trace it back on my mobile.I intended to say is you are not bothered whether people will review your work still standing tall like a rock..
Love
Inevitable in this transient frame
Whirling for eternal bliss
not bothered about the reward
or punishment, facing the judgemental
people blaming god for their fantasies
and miseries, still waking aspiring
to bask in sun's glory , night under the stars
Knowing nothing is permanent, still
rowing my transient sinking ship
to see a ray before I drown...
Dear Piusha,
My achievements, I need not brief, but I shall tell you, I was in Abu Dhabi ( for over 30 years) their the Cultural foundation gave me a Ten Thousand Dhs ( Almost 150,000 Indian Rupees as CASH Prize for my poems written on Desert life, the poems were kept in frames at the Abu Dhabi Cultural center, hence I am not worried about my poems or its reviews at all. I am sure, I can earn my own bread out of my writings. Very few people understand me, like you ( Piusha ), Cherie, Sir Jim Arnold, Shahjehan , Valerie, a few names in Cosmo. Many thanks for your kind consideration and love.
Regards, Love
WILLIAMS
I feel proud for you William. ...hats off to your achievements and courage to face life.And I know for sure it's your passion since you started to think...possibly..my guess..lol
Piusha,
Just a few lines,
All support to all who love " POETRY " irrespective of caste, creed, poor or rich from a true friend of Poetry, being I myself is built-in-poetry from God, Almighty, so confident
Love, Regards
Williamsji
Courageously March dear William for sure one day world remember your work....For sure in your circle you have etched a mark..Let you grow more and more, touching sky counting stars..
Love and light
Piusha
Piusha,
Thanks for your words, thanks for your broad understanding
Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI