Poem -
Gumtree Forrest
Imma just say,
I`m lost and I`m afraid
Running through a Gumtree Forrest
Trying to getaway
Imma just run
They chase me just for fun
Crashing through a Gumtree Forrest
Big ideas - actions none
Imma just jump
Blandness in the wordless dump
Screaming through a Gumtree Forrest.
Trees burnt to stumps
Sparks, Flame, Ash.
The Fish of the Sea.
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Comments
cool write....thx Fish
Awww thanks Lorris! I`m glad you like my work. Best wishes. TFOTS
I got in the rhythm! and I don't have rhythm! nice job Max! ...........Jim  4pm right!
Aww thanks so much Jim! Idea from a song again! Lol, kind regards, your friend, Max
Hi TFOTS, Lovely lines, lovely Rhythm...could feel the ash and smell the smoke. Cheers!Â
Awww Thanks Cleo! Means so much for you to comment. I'm glad that you liked my work! Best wishes to you. TFOTSÂ
Hello TFOTS...
At first I thought this might be a tribute to the victims of all the wildfires until I read back through the comments and the song was your inspiration...
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
sparrowsong
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XD, thanks Sparrow, more about a prayer that it doesn't happen again, worries me ever summer. I'm glad you liked it though! Kind regards. TFOTSÂ
Nice one Max...feeling the panic and angst here 🤗🤗
Awww thanks Marion! I'm glad you liked it. Kind regards, your friend MaxÂ
Wow, Max, you're a song writer as well as a poet! Excellent! Will it be you who sings it? Great work...loved the flow of this x
XD, Sorry Tina! I like to say I am a songwriter, but I promise you it will never make it past words on paper lol! It means so much that you think so though, kind regards, your friend Max
Wow , beautiful ... love it !!!Â
Thanks so much E! Means a lot for you to comment on my work! Kind regards. TFOTSÂ
Run forest run.Â
Thanks, Liliana! Your comments are always really apericated. Kind regards, your friend Max