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Half done

Left a life half ruined. 
A heart half broken. 
Left God knows what. 

Half done, thought there would be time to go back to it. 

Thought wrong, thought right,was sometimes uptight, distressed, undressed by the thoughts of yesterday. 

Oh half done, backward, inside out.
Wrong side up, was it half happy ness , where you half gullible.

Never quite felt whole. 
Never figured out what was missing, new what was lost. 

Half a chance to succeed. 

If one only half doubts what what and who's who. 

A flip point. 

The moral of my story is that your only ever half to blame. 

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S.zaynab.kamoonpury

Yes half done things and yes always half to blame. Kudos for a fine poem!

Plz do read and comment my newest poem too 

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