Poem -
Half Life
It is difficult to breathe as the sun disappears
A vacuum envelops the heart
Muffled silence stifles blooming dreams
And jackals feast on the baggage
Droplet tears are covertly adorned
While mourning the duet of unity
Half a heart inspects proposed mortality
As mirror image slips into twilight
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Hey REBECCA!!!!.....this is so fantastically succinct and profound....... Love the band and what they did promoting the homecoming of soldiers....... and the stories of what those families go through is heart-wrenching stuff!!....... well conceived & BEAUTIFULLY delivered....... you're so creative.......ALL STARS!!!......smokin' grooves sister girl.......LOVED THIS!!....... high fives!!....T xo.Β ?
Hello Tony. Thank you. Our vets and families mean a lot to me. They should be praised and appreciated. So glad you liked this and thank you for the stars. Blessings and hugs friend.
Rebecca-GREAT WRITE
Hello Mark. So glad you liked this. Thank you for stopping in and sharing my ink. Hugs and Blessings.
beautiful pen Rebecca!
Hello Lisa. Thank you so much. Always a pleasure to have you visit. Hugs and Blessings hon.Β
Hello Rebecca...
Great write!Β
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsongΒ
Hello Sparrow. Supporting our vets is one of my passions. Thank you for swinging by and letting me share. Hugs and Blessings friend.Β
Hey Rebecca...This is beautiful....you sure have a big heart....enjoyed this
Lots of love....Rose
Thank you Rose. There are a lot of vets in my family. Two brothers, my father, two uncles, and more... I see them react to the way vets are treated and I do my best to remind them that they are appreciated... for everything.Β
Glad you enjoyed this, hugs and Blessings hon, Rebecca