Poem -
Haloed in silver Azure
Our shadows met, dancing in the moonlight, a whisper of love invaded every crevice of the wall I had built to keep out the cold;
the warmth seeping in, till there was nowhere left to shelter -
The faintest glow, igniting all that I tried so hard to hide, when you held me so close, I held my breath;
We are celestial stars haloed in silver azure, no one truly knows what that means but us -
Our most treasured memories of our dance in the radiance, sweet love, poetry in motion, honeyed madness,
may I turn off the aubade, so we may have this dance once more?
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Hey CARON!!..... this is a beautiful write my friend!!...... the flow you've created within the phrasing makes the whole thing read like true love's ballet!!..... and the reference to the "aubade" made the dance that much more enhanced...... an elegantly delivered piece...... makes you want to hear that morning love song.......ALL STARS...... PINNED!!........ excellent writing sweet poetess!!...... LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo. ?
Hey CARON!!..... this is a beautiful write my friend!!...... the flow you've created within the phrasing makes the whole thing read like true love's ballet!!..... and the reference to the "aubade" made the dance that much more enhanced...... an elegantly delivered piece...... makes you want to hear that morning love song.......ALL STARS...... PINNED!!........ excellent writing sweet poetess!!...... LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo. ?
Thank you Tony, it was so good you gave me two comments!! :-) I always appreciate your feedback!
Love and best wishes Caron x
Beautiful!
happy Halloween
from Jai:)
Ah, thank you Jai, happy Halloween to you too! Caron x
Hi Caron Gorgeous Romantic write
I hope the dance happens again
stunning imagery
Best wishes Debs x
Thank you so much Debs! I actually dedicated this one to my husband, after 7 years together! Best wishes Caron x