Poem - 03 February 2021, 04:03

Hate your love

Bad taste left on my lips
Waves tossing me off our ship
Uninvited is your love
Flying alone, one white dove

My vision is crystal clear
In my hand lands my last tear
Claiming love when it suits
Leaving me again like rotten fruits

You only come when you need me most
My fascination with you, for you to boast
Gripping at my heart, you won’t let go
A ghost in my soul, my head can’t say no

Coming and going as you please
You make me weak, you make me freeze
Loving you that much I can’t bare to see your face
On my lips you leave a bad taste

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Whispering Dream03 February 2021, 05:44

I felt your pain in this piece. You sound so thorn between love and being at peace. Towards the end it seems like you chose to leave and be happy with yourself. I can feel it clearly, you know you want out. You know this isn't good enough for you anymore. Even though something seems to be pulling you back to him you know it's not good enough. Set you heart free and your ming will know peace.
Sometimes love happens to teach us lessons, remember what this love thought you and move onto happier places.
Love&Hugs,
W.D

Tony Taylor03 February 2021, 10:32

Hey DOMINIQUE!!....A VERY powerful poetic declaration!!.....Being torn between the recognition of truth and the powerful emotions of Love is an extremely difficult place to be.....but no matter how this turns out.....you WILL be a much better/stronger person for having gone through it!!.....ALL STARS!!....I applaud you just for having the wherewithal to post this on line.....I'm sure it helps in some small way!!.......Ballsy for sharing!!.....Thank you dear poet sister!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )