Have you ever ?
Have you ever felt like you can not quite figure out how you feel , like all of a sudden everything becomes less real ?Β
The time ticks on but you are stuck inside a whole other universe , and you can not understand your own emotions as if you have some kind of curse ?Β
Have you ever sat up as little crystal like tracks invade your face , from the tears that wonβt slow as if they are apart of some sick race ?Β
You donβt know why they are falling as nothing significant has took place , yet the tears keep streaming down your face .
Have you ever wondered if anyone else feels as pathetic as you do ? Not knowing what they feel or why the days seem so blue ?Β
Have you ever prayed maybe someone understands what is happening in that brain ? Babe you every thought maybe , just maybe I am not insane ? That maybe other people to feel this pain .
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No, I've never really thought too much about it to be quite honest with you, Courtney.
But I rarely think of anything that has to do with matters of the heart.
Nicely penned...
~Dean Kuch β₯βͺβ«?β«βͺβ₯
Thank you ?Β
Hey COURTNEY!!.....my apologies for not having been to your page more often.....I have a crazy life.....anyway, I'm glad I caught this piece.....it's the kind of introspection that most writers can relate to....because the very nature of being a writer is being observant!!......and this is VERY observant of you!.......As I read this piece three things happened....I wished you had formatted it differently so that it would be more easily understood......I applauded your words internally because of your youth.....and I wanted to phone a friend to let him see the raw talent that exists on COSMO!! {he's always asking me why I waste my time on this small poetry site}.......this write speaks volumes dear poet sister.......your gift shines through your words.......the fact that you're asking big questions within the confines of 'well considered' poetic prose is striking.......please.....never stop......you have everywhere to go with your gift.....and there is no denying the fact that you have a curiously talented mind......ALL STARS!!......well done........LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo ??β΄β€β΄??β΄?
Awww thank you so much this was so wonderful to read βΊοΈβΊοΈβ€οΈ
Thank you so much β€οΈ
It sounds like a sense of depression and lost emotion, hope this is a write and not how you feel, there is so much good in the world to look for, take care,Β
good write....
Faith
Just written of pure emotion thank you hun xx
Amazing poem!! I could feel all the emotions!