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Hell has a room!!!

Hell has a room!!!

Hell is sure to be a touching subject, to bad there is no limit on how we get into the eyes of the public. We push ourselves to go that extra mile,  to win all those repeated back to back title's. I'm a marvels giant to all you little menohes, you'll never be able to compete with my highs an lows.  So suicidal with my thoughts I come prepared with pistols an rifles, So ready to put these squares some circles an lase up my Nike's.  I'm in my zone an back to the streets in a way so amazing, looks just like a college sorority girls hazing. Got you feeling lacadazeacal an making your whole body shake, like I'm a 10 on the rector scales of an earthquake. So I'll never give into the media that's so fake, I'll continue to push myself to be so great. So if your a fan then start to appreciate, that I have all the rite answers for a new way.  Because I live my life the way I've always wanted to,  an in hell I have more than enough room!!!

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Tony Taylor

Hey JONATHAN!!.... I can see where you're coming from here.... some VERY powerful phrases within this write...... but (and please don't take this as criticism)......I think the whole poem would be SO much more powerful if you broke your lines differently..... because the phrases would punch better....... but as a whole this is a kick ass idea...... well conceived and delivered ..........ALL STARS!!....... well done poetic prose!!....... and ........WELCOME to COSMO!!........ LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo. ?☀✴✳

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