Help me

*its probably not good but i cant tell so please tell me what you think*

You left me crying
Crying in the rain

Help me Help me

All i feel is pain
Breaking breaking
I am breaking

Help me help me

My eyes going foggy
Laying laying
Laying in the rain

Numbing numbing
Body started numbing
Cant feel nothing

Help me help me

I think im dying
Buzzing Buzzing
All i hear is buzzing

Crap
Its all gone black

Claw claw
Crawl crawl
Cant get out

Loosing my sanity
I know im dead
But this isn't the end

No I'll be back

*flower girl offered her opinion and that would be the change i just made*