Hit By A Car
Hit by a car
Didn’t go far
Just scrapes and scratches
Healed with spray and patches
But what could it of been?Â
If I wasn’t so lucky in the end?
Hit by a car
Hit and thrown afarÂ
Broken ribs and a broken neck
Causing a scene from the wreckÂ
Medics rush to my sideÂ
In this moment I wish I could hide
Hit by a car
I see stars
My body numb from the pain
Tears trickle down like the rain
Its hard to breathe or to see
People circled around me
What happened to me? I don’t know...
I wish I could remember before I go...
Hit by a carÂ
This can happen right where you areÂ
But if you’re careful you’ll be fine
Try not to make the same mistake as mine
I was very lucky today
But maybe next time, for my life I’ll have to pray
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Comments
Intense poem well written angel
Thanks. I got hit by a car this morning while riding my bike. I was lucky and only got a few scrapes but others aren’t that lucky. I just want to warn others to be careful when out and about and for cars to actually pay attention to the road. It’s a Cary thing thinking you’re really hurt or that you could die from an accident.Â
Hello BookWorm...
I'm glad you're still here to talk about it...
My Mom used to worry about me because, I would ride my bike for 30 miles everyday on my short rides...
If I came home early she thought something happened...
It was much healthier for her if I didn't come home until after dark...
The way you described it, it sounds scary indeed...
I hope the driver pays better attention...
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
I have to ride an hr to school and 30 min to work and it’s terrifying. I don’t think I’m gonna use my bike for a bit. I just want others to be aware of the dangers they can cause it be in.
This rything theme, i find so engaging, entertaining even, your words that I'm hearing. Clever write, 5 stars and pinned. Inspired really awesome, a sensation within. Kind regards and best wishes to you. The Fish of the Sea
I am so happy to hear that you enjoyed my work. I am just now seeing this comment so I apologize for my late response as you left this comment around the time I moved out in a very chaotic way. I try to reply to all comments left on my work, I am very sorry with how late my response was.Â