Poem -
How to save a bee
Children's Poem
Busy bee
Wasn't feeling so buzzy
He was a sleepy old bee
And his head felt fuzzy
He wondered if he had just ate something funny
Or tired himself out making so much honey
What to do
What to do
''I don't feel so good''!
Busy bee lays down
And so he should!
He needs plenty of rest
And what else?
Can you guess?
A little spoon of sugar
They think it tastes the best
Mix it with some water
And give the bee a sip
Not too much though
Only a bit
Off he goes now
Buzzing and free
That's how to save
A tired old bee
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Comments
Hey SAFFRON!!.....this is such a wonderful children's poem....It checks all the boxes!!....great message for kids, reads aloud BEAUTIFULLY, has such a positive ring to its timing and tone......and has the softness of pure honey!!.....ALL STARS & PINNED!!......well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered!!......Bravo!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo : )
Thank you so much for your feedback - your comment has made me smile!
This has really brightened my day, please stay tuned for more children's poems. You can check out my Instagram page @samberpoetry for more work! :D xx
Buzz buzz!!
A lovely poem Saffron x
Ah ..children will love this Saffron...well done x
I love the rythm and rhyme. I feel there is lots more to the poem than just a children's poem. The way I like poetry. Thanks for sharing. Love, John
Kids are sure gonna luv this .. Bees of course are bound to luv it .. & growed up kids will love it too, just take it from me .. Oh' and I got a buzz out of it as well, but before this one buzzes off, consider it pinned .. okay ........... Neville :)