I Am Angry
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angry emotions take over my brain, its insane to see the hopless slane, dead for no reason i see there pain, wartorn countries bombed by a plane, its more than a shame, the worlds gone mad, i see so many faces sad, some stuff goin on is really bad, most of it is a false flag
thousands of humans dying, so many families hurting & crying, holding on to faith an still trying, hoping one day they will be smiling, but them chances are slim, the worlds turned grim, an the lights are goin dim, we cant let evil at play win
an invisible force at play, this is a ruthless way, too see it killing day by day, tell the lord make way as they pray, love lost with no delay, they could be the next victim to lay, breathless not making a sound, dead & stiff lay on the ground, another dead body is found, counting the bodies up like a hurd of sheep, piling them up in a big heap, mothers with no babies how do they sleep, the death toll is gettin steap, this isnt how life is suppose to be. IM ANGRY ARE YOU!!!!
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"...its insane to see the [hopless slane] hopeless slain." ... Check spelling where indicated, James...
"...dead for no reason [i] I see [there] their pain..." ... "I" is a proper noun in refer ence to yourself. Proper nouns should always be capitalized.
"There" is an adverb indicating a sense of place.
Their, the word you were searching for, is a determiner, or possessive pronoun, meaning belonging to or associated with a person of unspecified sex.
There and their are Homophones.
Homophones are a type of homonym that also sound alike and have different meanings, but have different spellings.
"the lights are goin' dim, we cant let evil at play win" ... Just as light cannot exist without darkness, neither can good exist without evil. It's an impossibility.
It's the Yen/Yang theory.
One does not exist without the other being present.
~Dean Kuch
Why are you correcting this poor soul when you can't even write 'reference' as one word?
Reference.
There...are you happy now?
I wasn't addressing you anyhow, was I, Terry?
I was addressing James.
I thought we were all here to improve our writing and to help others improve as well.
I'm here for that reasonāto improve and help others do the same.
Why are you here?
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Nothing makes me quiver more than how those who's helpless & hopeless get killed probably by the second of each day by an evil force that makes my emotions run high, i cant imagine the pain they must go through it hurts me to say it the most, its uncalled for totally uncalled for ?
And yet it happens every day in the name of freedom and religion, yes, James?
In Scotland, or with the IRA in Ireland. You have Al-Qaeda and Hamas in the Middle East, the CIA and Black Ops in the US...
War is Hell, and war is evil.
There will always be collateral damage.
But it is sometimes a necessary evil to ease the suffering of many.
You enjoy and I the freedoms we have today only because of those who came before us who fought and died for our right to write the things we want to say.
Unfortunately, innocent people die.
Freedom is never free, my friend.
It always comes with a hefty price.
~Dean