Poem -
I BREATHE YOU IN
I breathe you in sending
shivers down my spine
The look in your eyes
they glaze overĀ your mine
I play with your hair wind
ringlets with my fingers
Your kiss to my neck sendsĀ a
delicious tremblingĀ that lingers
Your touch alone sendĀ rushes
of tantalizing tinglingĀ sensations
Erogenous zones erectile in
pleasure, passion stations
Breathing quickens i pant
you pant we are one together
An explosive finale ofĀ lovemaking
taken to someĀ other aether
We lie exhausted wrapped
in each others arms
waiting forĀ our breathing to
slow,Ā excitement calms
We are two hearts forever
of that there`s no doubt
I breathe you in my love
Your mine.Ā Never to breathe out
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WOW!! ~ DEBS!!..... this is smokin" hot phrasing & delectable word choices that send your minds eyeĀ directly to the authors intent....... passion ~ in its most desirous eloquence...... delivered poetically and leaving the reader exhausted in its sublime swell...... some gorgeously sexy phrasing here as well....... so who's the lucky guy?..... or did you read one of those Victoria Holt novels or something?.... cuz....... these are some smokin' grooves sweet poetess!!..... bet Cherie LOVE'S the heck outta this write!! (lol!)......... high fives girlfriend!!.......ALL STARS .......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.....T xo
Hi Tony Ā Thank you for your great commentsĀ
Hmm i kind of have met someone lol Ā he read some of my poetry
and dared me to write one that was a bit sexy so i wrote this and textedĀ
him it earlier just before i posted it here. IĀ havn`t heard back yet ha haĀ
Thanks again my friend Ā love n hugs Debs xo
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beautiful, sexy Deb!
Hi Ā Poetess thanks so much for readingĀ
and commenting much appreciatedĀ
best wishes DebsĀ
Hi Poetess Thanks for readingĀ
and commenting very much appreciatedĀ
Best wishes to youĀ Ā DebsĀ
Hi Ā Cherie As i said to Tony i have met someone, early days at the moment
nothing like this write occurred though lol he just dared me to write
a sexy poem so i sent this to him i hope he likes it :-)
Thank you my friend for your comments you have me blushing :-)
love n hugs Debs xox
Hi Debs....this is sexy.......though it's way out of your usual write but it's well delivered. It shows how versatile you are. I bet he'd drool when he reads this.Ā
Lots of love...Rose
Hi Rose Yes a different write for me but was fun to doĀ
Thanks for your comments dear Rose,Haha he did like it but
as i told him it wasn`t about him just that he challenged me to writeĀ
a sexy poem lol Ā
lots of love Debs Ā
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Hello, A very lovely, sensuousĀ poem.Ā
Hi Rebecca Thanks so much for reading
and commenting very much appreciatedĀ
Best wishes DebsĀ
Wow Debs you're a clever poet. I've just had to go for a cold shower lol
Hi Wendy Thanks for the great feedback :-)
much appreciatedĀ
Best wishes DebsĀ
Hi Dear Debs,
Wow, waiting to exhale, but the necessity never needed.Ā Ā Fates foundlings forever joined in ecstasy,Ā rising far above the world to an aether atmosphere.Ā Ā Your beautiful words of perfect passion, stir your readers innermost desires.
Hugs, Peace and Love,
xox Larry
Hi Larry Thank youĀ for your great comments
I am glad youĀ liked it, it is very different for meĀ
but it was fun to write. Love n hugs Debs xox
Hey debs this is truly an amazing piece of work. Sorry for the time away . I had Ā reboot my brain and refocus a bit . Happy you found someone and hope it does work out . Ā Loved this poem . Loads of passion poured into this one . Great work rockĀ
Hi Rock Nice to see you back.
I am seeing someone ,still very early days yet
butĀ we`ll see how it goes :-)
Glad you liked this one. Thanks so much forĀ
the great comments,CheersĀ DebsĀ
Hi Debs. A sensually erotic and beautiful write you have here. Very much enjoyed the way you eased me into the pleasure sharing love. Hope all is well. Peace!
Hi Devon Thanks so much Ā a bit different for meĀ
this kind of write, so glad you enjoyedĀ
best wishes DebsĀ
Hi Debs, a very tantalizing read, loved the wording, a perfection of romance and love!! <3
Hi Ā Michael Thank you for Ā your kindĀ
words glad you enjoyed
Best wishes DebsĀ