Poem -
~ I Have Broken Through Evening's Light ~
I have broken through evening's light...
Into the very essence of its cavalcade
Where darkness is as warm as angora
And the sinking of the sun tucks me into its bravery
As if to remind me
Of what
I am made...
I glide slowly into its forest
Where I encounter the green liquid
That glows from the veins of its high vines
And reminds all that come to visit
(during the dying of the day )
That it is here
Where the black hearse of night
Waits
To guide all mankind
Into dreams incomprehensible...
Giving birth to ideas
That change the world
By breaking through evening's light
And into those places
Imperceptible...
Tony Taylor
February 2023
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wow! another classic Tony!.......................................................................Jim
Indeed!!!
Truly beautiful Tony!Β Eloquently flows from an inspired mind.Β
You know...right here in the reading of these words...your words...
'Where darkness is as warm as angora
And the sinking of the sun tucks me into its bravery
As if to remind me
Of what
IΒ am made...'
....I find the place I seek to be. This place of safety and solace and peace....this...cosmic hug that only you can adequately convey to the reader with your gift of penmanship and depth of soul. You have clearly been here...where is it??? You are a truly gifted writer Tony...I adore these words...I am comforted that such a place exists...thankyou x
outstanding poem
LOVELY WRITE LINDA
You tricked me into thinking this eas gonna be a Lady of Shalott, yet it is rather a Galadrielπ That girl is always there in the forest... A cure for the Soul
Magically written βοΈππΌ
Tony β¦you have cast a spell on your reader here. Right from the very first stanza, we sink into the depth of universal love. Where you source the true nature of our energy and its place in this vast open space. Where life envelops a beautiful symmetry we will only fully comprehend once we leave these flesh vessels, and step into the cosmic path that leads to truth and understanding. Your words elaborate on the tender harmonious facets of this truth, and how we as humans can dip a toe into lifeβs ocean, through mindful meditation. Where the correlation of the soul and universal energy teeter the minds eye to catch a glimpse and sensation of the flavour of truth and what is yet to come for all of us. So beautiful a write my talented poet :) xxΒ
Always at it... Great lines Tony... Cheers.
Just wonderful!! Yaaaayyyy!!!!Β
The place where this poem takes me is....
where i wanna GO.
Thank You.
Woww another sublime muse awesomely inked in marvelous poetic style. Kudos!!!
plz also read my newest poem too and comment only if its not a bother.
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another classic prose. excellent!
Bewitchingly beautiful .. both before and beyond the realm of stars and mere mortal rockets brother T .. Neville :)Β
Fantastic