Poem -
I have a mind of my own
Do you really think I'm such a fool?
That you can play me like a musical tool,and I'd just obey your rules?
Jump just because your drowning in a pool?
needless to say..HOWEVER
I have a mind of my own
I'm nobody's tool
Nor am i a fool
And as for the pool?
Your the one who jump without knowing the rules
The fool i see isn't me
Its the naive person who couldn't realize he was the fool
And i was the one of a kind irreplaceable jewel
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thank you
Hello
this poem is very direct, still a powerful meaning. if all think in such a way as the poetess think smooth and
systematic running of the world would be .........
i agree with you there
Very well penned.. I loved it. :)
thanks!
very nice enjoyed the strength within cheers x
thank you
Amazing! i like the repetition its very well written! I like the way it was written....very creative :) this is a very good poem it has strong meaning i love it! keep it up!
glad u liked it!
of course! :)
Greetings Asmaa,
Power not only lay in the pen you utilized to pen your master piece but it appears to exhuberate from the poetess as well, very direct, to the point and as a matter of fact. What you see, is what you get attitude, not allowing any opportunity for the subject matter to read between your lines, nor sway you from your way of thinking.Powerful attitude, in an even powerful individual....Great poem and great job.
Jimmy
thanks for your comment. and i can say that i am mostly a straight to the point type of person when am writing, i try to be in life to
You are most welcome, remain being who you are, it works quite well for you.
Jim
thanks!