Poem -
I Wish...
I wish you could hear how this poetry is in my head.
Come lay with me and let me read it to you instead.
Feel the emotion as I recite each word.
Reliving each moment as it accured.
Feeling every happy moment and every bit of hurt.
Kissing your soft lips after each sentence.
You wanna know if I'm telling the truth read my facial expressions.
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Comments
"...Reliving each moment as it [accured] occurred." →I believe you meant to write "occurred" here, Joseph...
Other than that minor "nit", I enjoyed the raw romantic imagery you've created here in your piece.
Well done!
~Dean Kuch ♥~?~♥
Thank you
You bet.
That's what we're here for. :)