Poem -
"**IDYLLIC PLETHORA**"
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Like 0 Pin it 3Sky changed her hue
clouds paved the dark
carpet ,thunders and
lightening marked his
advent on the distant
mountain as splurge
of idyllic plethora.
Discern on a distant alp,
heard his lavish patter on
the bosom of Terra,soaking
trees,wind whistling in this
douse ,Stood still gazing
in to the farness to thaw ,
drenching in his misty romance.
As he touched my teary eyes
wiping cheeks ,kissing my
lips with his splashes of
love, triumphing all the hurls,
melted as a globule in
this elixir of aqueous flux.
Spanning in shivery showers
in intense heat ,I roved across
the endless lands conjoining
the drifts as a mighty river ,
caressing in exotic rollicks,
cascaded into a bliss of ocean.
BY
PIUSHA
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Comments
Piusha Singh,
An excellent verse, with an overflow of a celestial romantic superfluity and overabundance of a praiseworthy love from the golden pen of a poetess. I love the below quoted lines. My applause, My love, My nomination. Reserved for my Column " Poet's Pen"
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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thnxxx a million Williams for your kind remarks and nomination.I feel motivated by your friendship..
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your talent is cutting edge, mystic, even esoteric. I found myself getting lost in you rhythm. this is a brilliant poem.
Thnxxx dear Glenn for your words of appreciation, I feel blessed today.Your reviews like Williams are gold to me..
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Wooww. .! Besti. .you have written it soo well..I really loved the romantic flow in each line..veryy appreciating ..you really deserve *5 from mee. .I too loved the lines sir mentioned. ..!!
Loads of love
Surabhi
Sweetheart I love to read your sweet comments.Thnxxx a million
Love and hugs
Oh sweety that piece is priceless. It`s stunning in content and it flowed so well. I agree with Leola on everything she has said. The piece transports the reader away to a magical place of romance and adventure and it gives the reader a real sense of the love posessed in the two charactors. I love the line " kissing my lips with his splashes of love " This work is a piece of real true art and a really superb piece sweety that you should be very proud of. I for one am very proud of you, so I`m sending this with love and a huge hug. Please know that I think your writing is wonderful and it just gets better each time. You are a beautiful and very talented young woman and a beautiful soul, your writing shows this to me quite clearly and you are an absolute pleasure to read. Well done on a well thought through and very well written piece. 5`s from me and a favourite, you would also get a nomination if I could give it to you. I love you sweety. George xx
O'sweet Georgina , I am humbled by your honest comments on my work.I truly admire your work as a learner.You are an effortless solid writer.And you know you are a woman whom I look at with proud, despite of the miseries.in your.life , still like an angel always smiling and spreading love around.I love you for what you are sweet one.Thnxxx a million for your kind review.
Love and hugs
Thank you for all those lovely compliments honey, you`ve got me smiling from ear to ear today, and you always do manage to get me smiling! and I love you for it, thank you. Love George xx
You are very kind and sweet , so it's not to flatter you but it's said from my heart sweetheart. .
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