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If We Were A Song

If We Were A Song

If we were a new hit song,
How would our melody go?
Would it start with an awesome rhythm?
Building momentum as it grows?

Will it be soft and subtle?
Or rocking metal with a beat?
Will it be a long introduction?
Anticipation tapping your feet.

But based on us it will be great!
We only settle for the best.
Fine tuning with our songs,
We don't settle for anything less.

We like to rock it loud and hard.
Just like we do as friends.
Full-on and heavy with passion.
Keep it rocking till the end.

It's got to have great drum beats.
And guitars that talk to the soul.
A strong voice has to sing the story.
It forms together rock n roll. 

The ending can't be too harsh.
You don't want it to end at all.
So the lead out must be gentle.
Leaving it open for a chant encore.

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Tony Taylor

Bravo & Encore!! (smiles)....I Love the way you used the various music writing terminology throughout this piece..... as though the poem itself were a Classic Rock-n-Roll anthem!!...... well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered dear poet sister!!......ALL STARS!!..... well penned up to and including the final line which was cleverly presented as being "Being left open for a chant Encore!!"........ cool stuff DERANI....and...in case no one has said so......WELCOME to COSMO!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!........T xo.  : )

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Katina Woodruff...

Let the sound move your heart, mind and spirit. Let the sound penetrate your longing for acceptance and movement. Let the sound in your poem resonate hope for the future, and what new poems you create. Let the sound keep playing in your head, until the music is shared through poetic devices. Your poem, inspired me to write something new today. To make music in the poem is an incredible feat. Well done! 

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Will it be soft and subtle?
Or rocking metal with a beat?
Will it be a long introduction?
Anticipation tapping your feet.

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