Poem -
IF YOU LOVE ME, HURT ME!
If you love me
Hurt me
Let me feel the wrath of your jealously
So I should know I’m your property
Pledged to you for eternity
Scratch & bite, slice & dice, kick & strike, show me no mercy
Rebuke my insolent perverse puerility
Magistrate your matriarchal authority
If you love
Punish me
I petition your feminist audacity
I need your disciplinarian authority
To purge my disingenuous iniquities
Upon my flesh declare your sovereignty
Chastise me to you’re satiated completely
Demand I comply willingly
If you love me
Hurt me
Justice adjudicated swiftly
Affirms that you love me
So don’t hesitate, punish me quickly
And whilst you do
Know how much I love you
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Comments
Hey Kimmy Alan, i love the way you write, i read all you post, it may just be me and my sensitivity that first cringed upon read, but we live and love differently in life, that is what makes the world so interesting, this is an innocent write displaying ones willing suffering of love, for love,
and not to be taken as a literal slice & dice , as some weird people may read into,
are you the punisher in this write, or punished, id hate to see any woman hurt in such a way, here in Australia i see and hear such horrible things about amused women due to violent sexual acts its scary,
anyway, good write, i see the exotic and kinky , but for me only, no judgment here, can't see the romantic side, love to you Kimmy, nardine xx
To be very honest Nardine, I find angry dominate women to be devastatingly sexy. That isn't to mean you should take my poem literally. What I'm trying to convey, is my (and men like me) need to be held accountable for misogynist behavior. Particularly when it comes to being unfaithful. I know what I write might seem disturbing to some, and confusing to others, but at some level I think many men have an inner need to atone for their sins at the hands of their lovers.Â
I can only explain what I am, but not why I'm that way. Its just who I am.
I get where you coming from and agree with you sweetie, your an awesome writer i admire your courage to be yourself, love to you, nardine xx
XXX OOO