I'll look for the rain
It's not like me to be the noble one for love
my wants have never taken a back seat so far
Somewhere along the way, did I learn to care?
Was that you as well? Changing my ways
Between an oasis of green and broken dreams
there is a junction, I stand for you in this place
with my hands in empty pockets, trying hard
to see your point of view, and cause you no pain
.
But I need more than a drop, more than a taste
for the feeding of this molten lava you ignited
when I hear the ring of carnal bells provoking
anticipation excites my skin to mindless play
.
So open your mouth let me kiss honeyed lips
let me ride the waves of your eyes made of blue
gorge my appetite with lust and possession;
No. That was the old me; I've changed for you
.
Behind these walls made of distance, we speak
and find common ground when the rain comes
it brings some kind of melancholy comfort
the kind that makes you aware of all you have
.
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Hello Christopher...
The rain looks great from your point of view!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Hello Sparrowsong,
thank you sweetheart...very good comment, hey doing a great job; thumbs up!
Chris you're not opening my mouth
As there's no honey here!! Ouch a good
solid poem here with very lovely descriptions
that Jai found mmm how you say, tasty!!
Luv Jai Master :)
Hey Sis. Cherie....I always get excited like a lil puppy when I see a comment from you, lol....I feel like trying to write another poem after I read a Sis. Cherie comment; not even kidding.....omg! you understand my screwed up poem better than I do, that is intimidating....yes I got inspiration to write this after watching an old 'Dexter' episode; lol, that's my story and I'm sticking to it....hey thanks again for comment; they should have a 'prize' on here for best commenting, for sure you would win....cheers
Hey C!!..........the Rain as carnal desire driving you on...........with the Lava ignited........even the rain has trouble controlling desire............this is SO well delivered bro..........you have an innate sense of writing that begs for prose from that gifted mind of yours...........i'll bet writing poetry is a simple thing for you..........I adore your style...........and when lust comes through your stuff with such elegance.........it's truly a compelling sight to behold...........well done brother..........miss you..........later tater...........T xo
Hey Jai, can you see my virtual tears of joy? that is very sweet comment....hey hold on, I just got inspired to write you a 'thank you' poem for such a lovely comment from Jai; I'll be back in five minutes...
Thank uuuuuuuu Chris I aWait you in BLing
I mean in Bali I wear my sarong for you with no
Underwear just corset, no no I didn't write that
It was my evil side ignore sexy intendo :)
Hello Christopher...
Thank You for the...
THUMBS UP!
You are...
Awesome Too!
THUMBS UP!
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Hey Jai, lol just a bit of vomit came in my mouth from you last comment....ooops! I gotta go...be back in five or ten minutes
Hey T, missed this comment....thank you for saying that, and I will take a compliment from you with great appreciation because when the smoke clears, you kick my arse in poetry every day of the week and twice on Sundays....not sure how easy it is to write, to be honest I sometimes have to work pretty hard to get what I'm trying to get...I sit staring at a write and can re arrange it for hours, walk away come back; still find nothing....honestly with certain ones I only think they are done when they talk back to me, lol; it's weird with me...I'm not sure how you do it; create from thin air words and scenarios....I enjoy conversation on the topic T, a kind of Poet's Forum, where artists can let their hair down and discuss this unique skill set that many people on here possess...cheers
Chris! I so enjoyed this sensitive and honest write. Lust has a "single" eye…one doesn't always examine feelings or intent as lust can drive you to possession and salacious pleasure without engaging the other gears. However, "no, that was the old way…I've changed for you" is the junction and suddenly one's priority changes into a desire to deliberately alter your "swag", contemplate, and enjoy the new emerging that you want to offer the other person. Rain refreshes, renews, restores, rebirths, etc.
xox val
Valerie, thank you for taking the time to write such a beautiful comment....I'm actually honoured by it to tell the truth, comments still mean a lot, even to grizzled veterans like me, lol....especially from poets like you whose work I have always appreciated, thank you once again my friend...so good to have you back on here :D
like this:Somewhere along the way, did I learn to care?
Was that you as well? Changing my ways.... Some things just happen that way huh!!!!
5 star my man
mark, thanks for saying that my friend....I'm totally appreciative of what you said, good to have you on here....love reading your stuff, cheers
Hello Lily Mae, thank you for your compliments; like a lot of poets I am an egomaniac, and my favourite thing to be called is an 'artist' so when you say this was 'artistically written' my ego has gone through the freaking roof, just sayin, lol...thanks Lily Mae, I'm just being a bit of an ass, I appreciate and love your comments, thanks again buddy....cheers