Poem - 05 December 2016, 18:19

I'm done

It's dark
It's cold
This is not home
This is scary
What is this feeling I can't pick up my phone
I'm scared to tell anyone
What if they laugh
What if they think I'm crazy and they leave me all alone
Will they think I'm crazy
Am i being stupid
Can things go back to normal
I'm crumbling
I'm done

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Donna Walton05 December 2016, 20:09

Very powerful and I felt your ache as I read this. Beautiful. Please don't be done just yet though eh?

Donna aka PP xo

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Naini Dave05 December 2016, 20:13

Thanks Donna, ur review means a lot...glad u felt the depth of the pain.. Cheers...?

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