Poem -

I'm done

author
Sumi

It's dark 
It's cold 
This is not home 
This is scary 
What is this feeling I can't pick up my phone 
I'm scared to tell anyone 
What if they laugh 
What if they think I'm crazy and they leave me all alone 
Will they think I'm crazy 
Am i being stupid 
Can things go back to normal 
I'm crumbling 
I'm done 

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Total votes: 2
Poetry Genre: 
Verse
Topic: 
Reality
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Donna Walton

Very powerful and I felt your ache as I read this. Beautiful. Please don't be done just yet though eh?

Donna aka PP xo

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Naini Dave

Thanks Donna, ur review means a lot...glad u felt the depth of the pain.. Cheers...?

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