I'm Fine

I'm Fine

Hi, hello,
I'm fine.
No, I'm not crying,
I'm fine. 
Am I sad,
no, I'm fine.
It's the truth, really,
I'm fine.
Well even if I'm not,
I should be.
I'm never fine,
you just can't see.
You only see what I want you to see,
nothing more or less.
And if you ask if I'm okay,
it won't be a no, it will be a yes.
Even if I'm crying,
and really, truly sad.
I am never happy,
so you should be glad.
So if you're bound to ask,
don't worry, I'm fine.
And If you ask, who's blood is that,
don't worry, it's mine.
No I'm not in pain,
I'm fine.
Hi, hello,
I'm fine.
Trust me, please, it's the truth,
I'm fine.

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Jill Tait

Great write sad but great xxx

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Bionic Elephant

Thank you. I like to express my emotions through poetry. Have a nice day!

-Bionic Elephant 🐘

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Jill Tait

Yes its great way to get things off our chest xx

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Bionic Elephant

Great joke! Very creative! Have a nice day! 

-Bionic Elephant 🐘 

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๔๒lคภкק๏гtгคเt

oh dear with respect to your words it wasn't a joke at all..

a friend of mine had this conversation with me about how he speaks to himself in the mirror , last year his son committed suicide and left him a letter apologising and imploring him to not blame himself..

that's why I said I hate mirrors I can't face the things I'm going through..

forgive me for responding in an elusive manner before...

 

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Bionic Elephant

Oh my gosh, I’m so sorry if I hurt you in any way. I sincerely apologize and I am sorry for your friend. 

-Bionic Elephant 🐘

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Bionic Elephant

Alright. Best wishes to you and your friend!

-Bionic Elephant 🐘 

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S.zaynab.kamoonpury

Aw it tells the story of many sad people who feel ashamed and embarrassed to tell of their pain and gloom to everyone. Through poetry we can vent with much less shame so kudos for a fine poem. 

plz do read and comment my newest poem this time for humour fun and a smile, interaction via comments is cool don't you think?

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Bionic Elephant

Yes. This is almost my only outlet for emotions. Have a nice day!

-BionicElephant 🐘

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Bionic Elephant

Thank you for those words. Have a nice day!

-BionicElephant 🐘

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Gwendoline

I think a lot of people hide their sadness to not worry others. People are more comfortable if you pretend to be alright. A good write here. I hope getting it out helped 

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Bionic Elephant

It did. Thank you for those words. Have a nice day!

-Bionic Elephant 🐘

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Being Me

Congratulations on your win. Well done! A worthy winner 👏👏👏👏

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Bionic Elephant

Thank you so much! Hope you have a nice day!

-Bionic Elephant 🐘 

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