Poem -
I'm to blame ....
We were coasting
Winning with ease
A moment of madness
No one to blame but me .
A lonely walk back
Carrying a newly redundant bat
No sympathy from team mates or crowd
What followed after , Made the shot dafter .
We collapsed like a house of cardsĀ
A poor shot indeed
Costly for myself and the team
No one to blame but I
I can't answer why
- Bitter taste in unlikely defeat .Ā
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What an honest and interring write Chris...it takes a lot of courage to admit blame....refreshing ?
Good evening Marion and thank you for your feedback (Sorry I've taken a while to respond) , I'm glad you enjoyed and hope your week has been kind to you and more important , keep up the great poetry ! Chris :)
Oh I agree with Marion, Chris. A great little piece on blame with a narrative to show why. Good to see another one of your poems! Px
Good evening to Pratibha and as always lovely to hear from you my friend , I hope you are keeping well , how is your writing going , I hope your book is doing well ! I recently put a different poemson my Facebook page ( which won a 'bronze' medal in a contest) if you fancy a read and review of it ! Best wishes always , Cx !
Hi Chris. Good thanks! Hope you new role is going well!
Yes my book is done it's out 1st oct!! I've posted the book cover on here recently if you want to.check it out!! called tangles + knots. I'm super excited!!
Wow that's amazing a bronze medal!! I will check it out! You must be so pleased!! Px?
Zero today... Hero tomorrow (let's hope) x