Poem -
In the past
Sources from some senselessness
More than what I`m told.
Seekers eyes, what I behold.
Raise your hand?
Think I`ll fold.
Emperors table made of pure gold!
Circled for the knights,
Jewelled crown in my sights.
Set up camp?
In moonlight.
More mercenaries,
Picking the fights...
Talk later, when we`re alone,
People`s people,
That`s what I own,
Steeple`s steeple.
Thought I might pray,
Thought these words
Might help someday,
Wondering, travelling off,
Covering, covered, cover the cost.
Finishing, finding, loosing, I`m lost.
Helping, I`m hoping, I`m trying.
Is it working?
No, it is not.
The Fish of the Sea.
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Comments
Yes! one soul at a time.XD! nice write Max! enjoyed!..........................Your friend!
Amen to that Jim! Glad you enjoyed it my friend!
Cleaver. Write more please.Â
Awww, will do Liliana! More in the works I promise!
Max superbly written and presented a poem you don't want to stop, just to keep reading.Â
A great message filled with great imagery. Thanks Max.
Be lucky and thanks for sharing, stay safe.
Thanks so much Shaun! I`m really glad you liked it my friend. To be honest, the hardest thing about these poems is trying to get them to stop! ;)... Smiles and Peace my friend. Hope you are well! Max
I'm good Max and thanks for asking.
I can see your other replies and I'm afraid of replying to your other one, in case you might think I'm some kind of last word specialist or nutjob!!!!
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No-fuss Shaun! Peace to you!
Really enjoyed reading this write. Cleverly executed objurgation..
Wow! Thanks so much Tina! Glad you enjoyed it. So awesome to see new (well in my eyes ;)) names commenting on my work. Kudos and peace to you. Kind regards. The Fish of the SeaÂ