Poem -
It Hasn't Been Ages
We talk of millions and millions, that's too long,
maybe seven thousand years would not be wrong;
it's ages since I loved you, just the other day,
but time waits for no man, so they all say.
'The Earth's moving on it's axis my dear,' she said,
when she felt everything shaking in the bed;
once I was offered fruit from the tree of knowledge,
just supposing I'd declined the dubious privilege.
Goodness prevailed, nakedness was not apparent,
everything you did was nice, hate not evident,
there was no time, the sun set when it wanted to,
Methuselah drifted by, he said his years were few.
I was created today, Rome was built in a day,
God created God and left no one out of the play.
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WOW!! WOW!! TERRY!!....there are so many magical and thought provoking lines/phrases running throughout this amazing Sonnet......but I have to commit to saying that the closing lines just blew me away!!......wow!.....ALL STARS & PINNED!!.....an excellent sonnet that makes one put down their paper and pencil and just sit and ponder for a while!!......GREAT work my friend!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!......thanx so much for sharing this!!......T xo : )
Hi Tony,
Thanks so much -
you are very generous and I appreciate
your comments greatly.
Love,
Terry.
xoxo :)
Sensational muse here, saying things in an engaging way, some thoughtprovokinv lines as well. I liked the earth axis line, woah nicely put! Kudos for the rest as well.
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
Hi S. zaynab,
Thanks so much.
Love,
Terry.
xoxo :)
Hi Terry! really cool write! one of your best I would humbly suggest!.................................................................Jim