Poem -

Just in Case it Still Matters

Just in case
it still matters
or for what it
might yet still
be worth ..
Even with both
eyes firmly
held closed ..
I have noticed
your invisibility
no longer
becomes you ..
And as always,
I still see right
through you ..
But for
a moment back
then, it became
perfectly clear ..
You are still
very much loved
even though
you are totally lost ..

 

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Jim "The Lad" ....

clear winner here my friend!......................................................................Jim

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Neville

How very kind Jim, cheers ..

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Marion

Nice play on words Neville...top marks my friend x

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Neville

I am so glad you popped in M .. I had been wondering if you were okay .. and of course, hoping that you are .. thanks chuck .. x

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Marion

Had a bit of a power cut I'm afraid  Nev...just recently located the light switch again so I will be annoying you ever so much again soon....😊 x

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Neville

........................................ Phew, okay by me :) x

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Amene Amene

Hi first time commenting here, Love this write here, Remembered my late parents. Even they are gone, they will always be in my heart. Like a puzzle, even if a piece is gone you can still picture out the whole picture for they forever be part of it, or part of your life
 

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Neville

Hello Amene Amene,

I am truly honoured that you took time to consider these words and to leave some of your thoughts behind .. Many thank you's .. Neville :)

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