Poem -
Kiss Me On A Monday
Goes with my other poem Beneath the Greenwoods Mantle
Kiss me on a Monday
Beneath the silver moon,
In the greenwood clearing
Among the faerie rune.
I will take your hand in mine,
I'll be your heart's desire,
As we dance togetherย
Around the faerie fire.
No lips better tasted
Than mine, of passion born,
We'll dance the night awayย
Until the Tuesday morn.
Enchanted love's forbidden kiss
'Neath moonlight'sย waxing glowย
Will steal your heart and mind awayย
As only faeries know.
Come with me, then, if you dareย
And dance to faerie song.
And kiss me on a Mondayย
For Tuesday I'll be gone.
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I wrote this a while back but reading it now I think it ties in with my other poem, Beneath the Greenwood's Mantle which I wrote the other day.
so beautifully composed!
Thankyou very much! Glad you like it x
wonderful poemย
Thank you, Greg!ย I'm glad you like it. I wrote it a couple of years back but when I read it yesterday (for thr first time in ages) I realised it went with the other poem. They are like a pair x
I think you're right T!!โฆ.it works beautifully......This is so well written that it remains a subtle voicing that compliments the other perfectly...โฆ.Your pen grows mightier with each new one (or edited old poem) you present dear poet sister!!โฆโฆ.ALL STARS!!โฆโฆ.Gorgeous poetry.....lovely metering and time...... sending this romantic narrative into the 'Heights' of Cosmo's poetic verse!!โฆ..Enjoyed this BEING ME!!โฆโฆ..thanx for sharing!!โฆโฆ.LOVE & ROCKETS!!โฆโฆ..T xoย : )
Thank you so much, Tony. The poems seem to be a pair.... totally by accident, Iย have to confess. At least, I did not conciously make this happen ...but they do seem to go. Stay safe and have a fab day, my friend x
Awww Beautifully penned my friend โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
Thank you, Jill x
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A very enchanting and beautiful poem with star-kissed imagery!ย
Thank you Linda ?ย I really appreciate you reading and leaving such a lovely comment. Glad you like it x
It's just so romantically beautifully written!! Xxx
Aww thank you so much Pratibha! That is very kind of you to say. Thankyou for reading and for the pin...I appreciateย it โx
I love your work, your an amazing writer hope you see the rest of my work as wellย
Hi Princess Chanda Robinson, thank you so much for your kind words. I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. I am glad you like what you read ?
I will most certainly pop across to your pages and read your work.
Thanks again x
I am just putting this out there.ย Monday is no good can you squeeze me on Thursday?ย I promise to provide a little tongue ?.ย
love the poem.and could not help but tease alittle lol ?ย
Hehe he... ???. Monday no good eh?ย What are you like?ย Unfortunately, Thursday is the day that faeries spend sharpening their spears and adding to their weapons stores. They are feisty little things and are not to be trifled with (although cream cakes, possibly).ย Got to be a Monday, Greg ?
Thank you for reading and leaving such a fun remark ??ย Glad you like it. Hugsย ?x
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ย " Or, any day, ending in , WHY ? "ย ย :)
Ah! Why?ย Now that is a very good question, why, indeed. Monday is her day of seducing when she walks this world in the search for mortal men... Her weakness. Any other day and she has slipped back behind the veil to attend to things that we can never know.
Thanks for reading, Richard, and for leaving a worthy query ?.ย Stay safe and keep well x
My Dear Being Me,
This poem has brought back a treasured memory, of when I was in the sixth grade.ย We had a variety show in the Spring, for the sixth through eighth grades, attended by all our parents.ย The theme was music from the Gay Nineties.ย My two friends and I had formed a trio, and we were one of the acts.ย We sang two songs, "Daisy", and "By The Light Of The Silvery Moon".ย ย
The silver moon's light
Appeared on a Monday night
We kissed till morn
All my love,
Larry xxx
Thank you Larry. Beautiful Haiku!ย I am so glad this brought back a treasured memory for you, it's nice to hear that. Hope you and the lovely Linda are well x
Being Me,ย
This was such a lovely write!ย Well penned!ย
Love your username, by the way!ย
Happy Easter!
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Aww Thank you ?ย Really glad you like it!ย Happy Easter to you tooย ??x
What an amazing write, gorgeous! Loved it, so loved up now, we need more poems like this, pinned and starred.!!!
Thank you very much for reading and leaving such a lovely comment. I'm really chuffed, thank you x
Seriously gorgeous work...hugs ?
Thank you so much, Marion โx
You're a very talented writer and your work just flows so effortlessly!
Thank you very much, Simon, that's a lovely thing to say! I appreciate you reading and leaving such a kind comment ?ย Keep safe and stay wellย x
Ah, I think this is my new favourite.
John x
I am very glad you like it!ย Thank you so much for reading. I truly appreciate your lovely comment. Keep safe and stay wellย ? x
A stunning write ! Lovely writing conjuring magical images , very well done , a brilliant read X
Aww...Thank you so much, Chris!ย As always, I appreciate you taking the time to read and I am pleased that you like it ? x
I could use this poem as inspiration. My better half is well overdue a love poem. The only recent poem I wrote about her was called Ashtray. I've posted it on other sites but I daresent post it here....she does very rarely read my poems lol.
Very well written by the way.
- Sydย
Why don't you want to post "Ashtray" here?ย It's a shame she doesn't read your poetry much. As for this poem, I am honoured that you would want to use it as inspiration.
Thank you so much, Syd, for reading and leaving a lovely comment. I appreciate it, thanks x
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Reads like a modern day Shakespeare romance, love the word construction and great rhyme to arrive at your almost pleading but revealing conclusion.
Another superb write and full marks.
Thanks Tina for sharing and enjoy poetry and life.ย
๐ย Glad you like it, Shaun.ย Thank you very, very much for reading. I truly appreciate the support x
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This is absolute magik ..............& you can't get more faerienough than that now can ya :) x
๐๐๐ oh fairy good Neville! Your comments just get better and better ๐ ย butย seriously, thank you so very much for your support. Glad you like it x
You should gnome me by now Tina .. How elf can I demonstrate my admiration for thee ...
Answers on a postcard to my gnome address & gnome messin about on the way to the post office :) x
Hahaha...great comment, Neville. I wish I'd seen it before now ... but at least I've now seen it. Thankyou, thankyou, thankyouย xx
You are of course, most welcome. Tis good to see you and I trust you remain in good elf ..x