Kiss With My Eyes Open
~~Recieve what I'm telling you
I have nothing but faith in you
Even though this slight ignorance is something of that of sweet bliss
I respect the things you tell me
Even when my heart is frozen
But that doesn't mean I won't kiss you with my eyes open
Yeah that's right I said it
I'm woman open enough to admit
That I'm so freaking sick of this
I love it when your eyes speak
Hope it's my heart you keep
And i will never know
Why the hell I love you so
So I guard my heart unspoken
But you better know I always will kiss you with eyes open
Cause I never know what you'll do
I can never be sure that I won't lose
You
I try to prove my love to you
Please love me the way I do
To you
Please
Please every desire
Maybe wih a heart of fire
It'll do something to thaw my soul
From this old
Freezer burned mind of mines
Please do
Please.....do
My heart is in bloom
I have no room
For rent right here
And even when I'm empty
And I know that lies are spoken
I must learn to always kiss you with my eyes open
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Comments
Wow Brittany Austin, I've never read you before (my loss).........but I really like this write........you have a great sense of rhythm and timing........in fact this reads VERY much like a song lyric..........regardless, it has a lovely flow.........and conveys the subject matter with a very honest feel to it.............much enjoyed my friend.............well done...........and welcome to COSMO!!.......in case no one has said so!!...........smiles.........T xx
Thank you very much for the comment and I'm so glad you enjoyed it! This one I never thought on being a song, I do have songs I have written on here though, but this was more so something that just came from my head. I will think about making it a song thouh ;) Thank you again
Good write, Highly romantic and lovable lines, my applause, my vote
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you so much for the feedback :)