Let It Rain
Grey is scrolling
Across sky broiling
My blue eyes fill with rain
He left today
Again today
And all I feel is pain
Tears are breaking
Heart is aching
Blue eyes fill with rain
He walked away
Again away
All I feel is shame
Let them fall
In downpour clearly
Light the sky
With dripping stream
My guy has gone
And left me lonely
My blue eyes fill with rain
World is rolling
And it’s turning
My blue eyes fill with rain
He left today
Again today
And all I feel is pain
Head is throbbing
Teeth are chattering
Blue eyes fill with rain
He let me down
Down again
And all I feel is blame
Let them fall
In downpour clearly
Light the sky
With dripping stream
My guy has gone
And left me lonely
My blue eyes fill with rain
Let them fall
Let them fall
Let the drips pour down on me
Wash away the sweet sad sorrow
Cleanse the pain
Let them fall
In downpour clearly
Light the sky
With dripping stream
My guy has gone
And left me lonely
My blue eyes fill with rain
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beautiful pen Rebecca
Hugs Lisa thank you.
Aww....We tend to blame ourselves when they walk away from us and we feel it's shameful...even though it's painful and we're left heartbroken with nothing but tears and loneliness... Enjoyed it...was was almost singing it out loud....nicely written
Lots of love....Rose
Did you know that there are tons of songs that talk about crying in the rain. lol I worked on this with a very talented group of writers who helped me keep it original. A project full of fun even if the write is sad. So pleased you enjoyed this hon. Blessings and hugs.
Hi Rebecca This is sad write of the heartbreak of a break up
it reads like song and a great song i think it would be
loved it!
Best wishes Debs
Hi Debs, I hear "Blue Eyes Crying in the Rain" when I read it and as I was writing it. So glad you stopped by and enjoyed my drippy ink. Writing sad things usually drains me, so I don't do it often. Hugs and Blessings hon.
Hi. Just dropping in to say this" write" is touching. Who among us have not felt such sorrow in this life time? I love the way it has a repetitive feel.....because the pain, sure doesn't leave us with the first rain drop! Great job!
Thank you Paula. It is nice to meet you :) Hugs and Blessings.
Hi hon... I love the rain too. The rain, the shower... both perfect places for crying. Touching on these sad moments is difficult for me sometimes, but they do make for good poetry... :) Hugs and Blessings purple one and thank you so much for stopping by to share my ink.
tone and rhythm are superb like raindrops dancing with your words, this one could be sung, brilliant creative verses reminds me a little of an old time 'blues' song, love this, you got to love the rain, with the 'blues', awesome inspiring write, cheers pal, tribute, and echo...
my baby gone left me..... crying in the rain, my baby gone left me.... the sun's never coming back again...
The blues are perfect in the rain. Got images of New Orleans dancing in my head now lol. So glad you liked this Christopher. It is fun to play with lyrics, getting lost in count and trying to imagine music to the words. Much joy and satisfaction when it works. Thank you so much. Hugs and Blessings.