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Letter to God

Letter to God

Dear God,

Sometimes it gets so overwhelming... fear and doubt
I’m left to wonder if you are really there at all
But again, I see you in every little thing around
The first, when the night ends and day crawls

The rays of the setting sun 
Is a reminder that You’re awesome
I feel you so near and I hear your gentle voice
Assuring me of your unending love

Sometimes, I’m again force to ask if you are there
When I see the injustice taking place here and there
When I see so much suffering and too many tears
When the fallen angel seems in control and too much fear

When things look so out of control and nothing is predictable
When things happening around look so abominable
Then I am filled with disappointment, frustration and resentment
At times, I’m even angry at you and feel a sense of bewilderment

Then I feel your touch and your  presence again
And I am reminded that you understand and truly reign
That to your glory is everything that transpires here
No matter how chaotic they might appear

Help me to realize that it is I who have failed myself
And the world in trouble for where it has gotten itself
Increase my trust in you to take care of everything
And to always remember that you’re the creator of everything

Thank you Father as I trust you now and always
Yours truly, your ever loving daughter

 

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Deborah Evans

Hi Sweet Rose A beautiful letter to god 
I think we all question  at times if he is there 
especially when all the bad things that goes on in the world
and with our own personal hardships through life 
I guess we must always believe that he is with 
us, and have faith he will be there to help us get through
the hard times.
I love this write Rose you have written it beautifully 
I love the rhyme and it flows superbly
 Great write A fav for me pinned 
Lots of love Debs 
 

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Rose Sho

Yaay!!!...Thanks so much Debs....your words have made my day....I'm thrilled to know you've pinned.. Your words are always encouraging....I really appreciate

Lots of love

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linda wright

very nice poem God is in control no need to worry linda

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Rose Sho

Yes He is Linda....Thanks you very much

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Rose Sho

Thanks so much Sweet Lisa.....Happy holidays to you too

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Greg Etsell

great poem rose yes sometimes we think he or she not listening like when some one  dies and you prayed very hard that would get better and don't then get mad at god and say why but it is plan great poem love it very much

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Rose Sho

Yeah.... sometimes it feels as if He is not there at all..but He is always there no matter what happens... Thanks so much Greg...I'm glad you like it

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Georgina Richardson

This is a wonderful prayer sweetie. It`s well written and it says so much of what life dishes out to us and what we inflict on ourselves. You can be sure that he hasn`t left us, he is just giving us all the opportunity to learn from mistakes and contribute to the world, for the next generation to come and so progressing mankind further. He shows his love in many different ways, we just have to have faith and trust him by simply setting our minds to working hard for him and ourselves and spreading love through that work. You have done me proud again sweetie with this superb piece, you are growing!

I love you dearly

Mummy xx

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Rose Sho

Thanks so much for your very insighful words mum....Yes I am growing!....lol...Thanks to you and others on Cosmo that I'm learning from everyday....I really appreciate you

Love you dearly

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sparrowsong

Hello Sweet Rose...

I amsure you're aware when we doubt His presence He leaves us...

When we begin to question things it's tells Him we don't trust Him...

We are accountable and responsible for the life we live here...

If we have gone off course...

That was our choice...

Maybe, we should take the pressure off of God and stop blaming Him for what's wrong....

Thank Him more for what's right...

If we realize that here prepares us for there?

Things are not going to be perfect for us and if we are not reading His word we won't understand and we won't grow...

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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Rose Sho

Yeah....but His love never departs from us even when we doubt and question Him....We bear the consequences of the choices we make in life...We don't always see what is right and thus hardly thank God...We focus more on what is wrong and thus the unending complains...Thanks so much for your very insightful words.....Thanks for your love and support

Lots of love

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Larry Ran

Oh, My Sweet Rose Sho,

I too have experienced the doubts.  How can He let so many young children die of cancer?  In my day, how could He condone the slaughter of six million of His chosen people?  Unlike you, I need answers. Thus, I have been catapulted into the ideologies of an agnostic.  I want to believe, but now I need positive proof.

Love,

Daddio

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Rose Sho

Sweet Daddio...It beats me too when I see such things happening..But I believe It's for a purpose...I hope you find that positive proof one day..

Lots of love

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Kimmy Alan

Reminds me when I was mad at God.   I tried to sue her.  But she wouldn't accept service of papers.

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Rose Sho

"She" is the supreme so who would just "Her"?...Thanks for stopping by...I appreciate

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