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Life's a roller coaster ride

Life's a roller coaster ride

I've stepped in and fastened the belt really tight
I'm on the the ride, the ride of my life
Sick to my stomach; verdict to hear
Awaiting the incline...anticipation and fear
I'm sitting alone; but there's chaos around
End getting closer. I can see only ground
No turning back; wheels now in motion
Roller coaster called 'LIFE' with all it's emotion.
Too late for regret; heart in your throat
Feeling a coward; no time to gloat
Butterflies deep in the pit of your gut
Just a child... So keep my eyes shut
Train comes to a sudden stop before the descent
Verdict: GUILTY! To prison you'll be sent
A sudden silence hangs in the air
A mother weeps. She weeps in despair

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BLOSSOM

This story/poem gave me tingles Maddison, such good analogies of someone's 'life' and the ride on a rollercoaster.  Felt the emotional ride very much and the despair along the way.  Cleverly written Maddison, a vote and nom from me!  Really liked this one:)

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Maddison Law

Thank you Rachel, you comments are always valued x

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Rachel Hughes

well you couldn't of said that better.

Because thats exactly how you feel.

you captured the emotion just right.

Guess no matter what part of the world were from.

We feel the same. and all experience injustice.

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Maddison Law

Thank you Rachel my thoughts and prayers are with you my friend...
Maddison x

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Maryam Afzal

NIce poem Maddison.. congratulations on nomination.x

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Maddison Law

Thank you Maryam for reading... Sorry for the late reply:(

maddisonxx

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