Poem -
Lifting The Veil!
I fell into a deep sleep
then starting dreaming
searching for the secret they keep
in this life thats deceiving
seeing these strange things
crooked queens & kings
a bird on a branch sits & sings
I cant fly with these broken wings
then it dawned on me
we must be under a spell
if that bird cant be free
we havent a chance in hell
then i thought fuck this
as i ran through the mist
weve got to take control
theres no way there taking my soul
spread the message of delivery
i thought this was all conspiracy
but this is some real life misery
lets unsolve this merky mystery!
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Comments
Many of the Greek and Roman thinkers/philosophers hypothesized that life was a dream..... from which we would awaken one day..... by experiencing that thing we call death......VERY much like what you've so creatively and eloquently expressed here!!...... Enjoyed this very much JAMES!!........ALL STARS!!...... well conceived & BEAUTIFULLY delivered!!........LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo
Thank you once again tony for giving me a positive message, life is but a dream then one day we wake up, some of us have already, but there is still some in the depths of solitude thats being the brainwashed victim, but one day too they will wake up an realize an become socially aware of what goes on behind that filthy veil they use..god bless you tony stay aware & keep shining ?
Your keywords are
Spot on
Your poem speaks volumes
Your message heard
loud & clear
this day James
I found a new poet on Cosmo
Thank you for reading my poems today.
Best from Jjai:))
Your welcome thanks for the feedback
keep shining ?
??? well done James! Much to think about ???
Its a crazy world we live in haha thanks the comments appreciate it ? ??