Poem -
Lines about Margate
Let me tell you lines I've collectedĀ
About where I live in Queensland;
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For one thing there are barely trees at all
And I never liked the people,
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But there is the ocean to swim in.
I am unable or unwilling to appreciate it.
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This is what it's like living in Margate.
So what if I'm in my head,
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And there's no rescuing me there?
Where will my next day come from?
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There is no love in my home that counteracts
The nervousness occuring duringĀ
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This awful feeling. There is just this;
I'm who I am and can never change.
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It doesn't matter where I live.
I'll always be sad. You will always be dead.
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Comments
Most powerful piece which your words brings me back to my own theory of Reincarnation, for some reason I'm always strange around the sea, and under trees, I find my ora is different, maybe you've had bad experiences in a different life perhaps? What a wonderful discussion, I suspect I'm going to get you to reflect a massive amount by my words today š¤£Ā your last line is a kudos because it works literally and in metaphor. š¹
SH isn't something literal and metaphoric just metaphoric? Also, that's the start to a poem, strange around the sea and under trees.
Metaphoric is when you speak of an arguement without saying it, literally for me is when it is obvious, yes I believe I must have been a sailor or a mermaid and or even Dante Alighieri, or even Einstein? Who can know. š¤£ Amazing our chats.Ā š¹Ā
I wonder if your Margate is the same or similar to my Margate .. sandy beaches & amusement arcades .. with a few tattoo parlours scattered around between the Turkish barbers & nail salons .. Oh' and candyfloss stalls & donkey rides .. it has been years since I've been back there .. and I'm sure its because I always felt like an alien there with different dreams, needs and values .. A deep poem today Rory and certainly one to ponder more deeply when I get home later .. NevilleĀ
Always an insight with you my friendĀ
The sad and the dead are always together.Ā
You still can rescue yourself. Ā BĀ
QueenslandĀ Ā MargateĀ Ā Anywhere
when we exist trapped on the inside
The outside is irrelevant. I know this too. X