Poem -
~ LIQUID MEMORIES ~
During days of most subtle discontent
I find that liquid memory
Takes me home
In reminiscing's 'time well spent'
I recall
The subtle lavender scent
Floating across
Time's reflecting pool
Where,
On the perfect wooden bench
I first came upon
The idea of you
And the Loving Cup
From which
I could drink you in
Then pour,
To my hearts content,
My liquid
Memories...
Tony Taylor
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Hi Tony,Â
This is a shit comment for a very good poem....please forgive me.
The title Liquid memories...takes me back to when I was almost a witness at a complete strangers wedding. They offered to pay me on the big wheel at Blackpool pier if I would be a witness to their wedding....My response was that I would, as long as they took a large whiff of the Canadian poppers I was carrying.
That was enough to change the bride's mind. Hopefully I've changed someone's life for the better.
Love and poppers - Syd xoÂ
LOL!! LOL!!…..that's hysterical SYD!!…..You're a trip man!!…..And that's a great comment.....Poetry is a trigger.....and in this case.....that trigger got your pen to bring me smiles......I Love it.....Thanx for sharing that!!…...and in the grand scheme of things you may have changed a life in a grandiosely positive manner!!…..Or as the Monty Python gang would sing ~ "Always Look On The Bright Side Of Life.."...…..smiles...….T xo : )
Nicely done, Tony. It's smooth. The wooden bench reminds me of me. I'd be walking around town and find a bench by the lake. I sit, have a rest, listen to music on my device and reminisce. About an exgirlfriend or the one that got away.Â
The subtle lavender scent
Floating across
Time's reflecting pool
That's how a memory comes to me. If there's a gentle breeze and you're by the lake, listening to a nice tune, man you just can't be bothered. 5 starred, liked & pinned, brother. Peace
VERY cool!!...thank you MICHAEL!!...I REALLY like your comments.....they always take me somewhere....and they are so easy to relate to.....sometimes I feel like I know exactly where you're comin' from man!!.....thanx again for all your 'way cool' support my friend!!......Kings to you!!......peace.......T xo : )
Thank you for the stars and the vote Esmerelda!!…..so good to see you on the pages!!…...peace...….T xo : )