Poem - 26 October 2019, 07:57

Little one

Poorly boy

Zac Bradbury

Little one

I wish I could take
How your feeling right now
I wish I could make
You better but how

Staring into space
My poorly little boy
Blank expression on his face
usually full of joy

Holding my hand so tight
I’ll never let go
Cuddling in all night
Full of love that you show

It hurts me to see you this way
Usually full of life
Always wanting to play
It’s not a permanent strife

I promise you son
Daddy’s got you forever
Everyday I have won
Because we are together

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Love

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Marion26 October 2019, 08:29

There is not much in life that hurts us more than seeing our child hurt. Lovely write Zac ??

Zac Bradbury26 October 2019, 10:23

Very true you just wish you could take it away on the plus side he seems to be on the mend bless him and glad you enjoyed the poem thankyou very much :)

Tony Taylor26 October 2019, 08:36

Hello ZAC!!......this is a gorgeous write...... not just for its sentimental intent and delivery..... which is VERY well conceived and delivered...... but also for the well conceived and penned A,B,A,B rhyme scheme!!....... this really got to me emotionally for the Father & Son aspect!!........ALL STARS!!....... well done dear poet brother!!........LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo. : )

Zac Bradbury26 October 2019, 10:20

Thankyou very much I’m glad you enjoyed my poem I put my complete emotion in this never nice when a child is poorly bless him thankyou very much for the positive feedback much appreciated :)