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Lost

*Lost Challenge*

Lost

Malevolence in a soul,
Damage tore chiasmic hole
You might’ve heard about a past,
Scoff self-proclaimed outcast.

Β Black make-up, stringy hair,
Almost certain one doesn't care.
Eyes vague quicksilver glass,
Even assuming has no class.

Someone stole reason to care,
Fragile innocence lost somewhere.
You can look with distain,
Belief still holds she’s to blame.

To comment just wouldn't do,
It implies awareness what one went through.
So politely turn away,
It's so much easier that way.

She carries this gaudy broach,
Garish tattooed at approach.
To be kind, shy away,
Not quite sure what to say.
.
One squirms like bait on hook,
You read so much in empty look
Don't gaze too deeply in her eyes,
It’s only an abysmal guise.
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Simon Bromley

Awesome, powerful, deep, true.Β  A great write Lisa my friend well done! I'm nearly finished with mine too posting shortly.

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Curious Onlooker

Very deep very well spoken and well thought out I love it dear Poetess. Well done!

A friend, CuriousΒ 

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Curious Onlooker

I just submitted my humble go at it! I think doing challenges like this will help me write more so I'm all for it.Β 

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Jill Tait

Brilliance xxx❀️❀️❀️

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Jill Tait

Walkin my 5 miles n just done Timexx

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Jill Tait

Guessin it’s my turn again pml

ok here goes pens at ready!!!
Β Drumroll please ?????

’Slow down please’

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Pratibha Savani

Etched beautifully and amazing verses portrayed of someone lost x

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Greg Etsell

wonderful poem
hope you will read myΒ 
poem lostΒ 

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Larry Ran

My Dear Lisa,

The depth of this beautiful write brings tears to my heart and Soul.Β  An innocent young maiden is abused once again, but instead of compassion, the World endows her with shame.Β  She is another lost Soul, a victim of her environment.

All my love,
Larry xxx

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Larry Ran

My Dear Lisa,

You are an aficionado in the art of evoking emotion.

All my love,
Larry xxx

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