Lost
*Lost Challenge*

Malevolence in a soul,
Damage tore chiasmic hole
You mightβve heard about a past,
Scoff self-proclaimed outcast.
Β Black make-up, stringy hair,
Almost certain one doesn't care.
Eyes vague quicksilver glass,
Even assuming has no class.
Someone stole reason to care,
Fragile innocence lost somewhere.
You can look with distain,
Belief still holds sheβs to blame.
To comment just wouldn't do,
It implies awareness what one went through.
So politely turn away,
It's so much easier that way.
She carries this gaudy broach,
Garish tattooed at approach.
To be kind, shy away,
Not quite sure what to say.
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One squirms like bait on hook,
You read so much in empty look
Don't gaze too deeply in her eyes,
Itβs only an abysmal guise.
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Comments
Awesome, powerful, deep, true.Β A great write Lisa my friend well done! I'm nearly finished with mine too posting shortly.
thank you Simon who will lay claim to the next challenge?? lolΒ
Stunning Lisa, just stunning.Β
NigelΒ
Thank you Nigel. a few of us are challenging each other if you want part you are more than welcome to participate.Β
great poemΒ Β
thank you Greg
Very deep very well spoken and well thought out I love it dear Poetess. Well done!
A friend, CuriousΒ
Thank you CO a few of us are challenging each other if you want to participate you are more than welcome. the last challenge was "Lost"
I just submitted my humble go at it! I think doing challenges like this will help me write more so I'm all for it.Β
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Brilliance xxxβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
thank you Jill
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Walkin my 5 miles n just done Timexx
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Guessin itβs my turn again pml
ok here goes pens at ready!!!
Β Drumroll please ?????
βSlow down pleaseβ
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Etched beautifully and amazing verses portrayed of someone lost x
Thank you kindly for your supportΒ
wonderful poem
hope you will read myΒ
poem lostΒ
that I will do Greg
My Dear Lisa,
The depth of this beautiful write brings tears to my heart and Soul.Β An innocent young maiden is abused once again, but instead of compassion, the World endows her with shame.Β She is another lost Soul, a victim of her environment.
All my love,
Larry xxx
it means so much to me to evoke emotion. that is what all poets strive for.
My Dear Lisa,
You are an aficionado in the art of evoking emotion.
All my love,
Larry xxx
thank you Larry