Poem -
Lost In This Life
Lost......Broken,
Endless fears unspoken.
Torn.......Shattered,
This Heart that NEVER mattered.
Lies.......Deception,
Striving for perfection.
Empty.........Hollow,
Yet Pain is sure to follow.
Hopeless......Failure,
Shame is mine to treasure.
Weary.........Weak,
With nothing left to seek.
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Hi Miss Hanks, I haven't read you before (my loss)........but I really like this write.........I love that you chose the wide-open format to present........"lost in this life" .......because it suits your title so well.........and I also loved the closing line!!!.........."nothing left to seek".. brought it home so well............strong write my friend.........well done!!...........smiles...........T xx
Thank you so much. I always loved to write but I haven't had a chance in quite some time. Thanks for the encouragement. I was so nervous about putting it out there. I look forward to reading more stuff from you as well :)