Loud & Clear

Can any of you even hear me?
Have I not been loud and clear?
I will not be made a fool of
I will not be another victim of fear
I'm marching on and forward
Like juggernaut i will not be stopped
I will keep on climbing Everest
Until I plant my flag at the top
Can you see me at all?
Do I not glare like a fog light?
I will not remain invisible
I will not lose in this fight
I'm rising up from the ashes
And spread my burning feathers like a Phoenix
I will soar through the solar system
Until you all know I mean it
Can you not smell what I'm cooking?
Does it not sizzle and crack?
I will not be the vulgar smell
For you all to laugh at
I will be that aroma that just lingers
Like the bog of eternal stench
And inbed myself in your nostril hairs
So you'll never forget
Can you not taste of this power?
Is it to much for you to drink in?
I am far more than a bitter taste
I am not just some bad gin
I'm a hint of ambrosia
The nectar of the gods
And I will reach the depth of this ocean
And I will overcome all of the odds
Can you feel what I'm saying?
Or am I more than you can take?
I am riding this comet
I am no mere mistake
My presence will be felt
When all is said and done
And I will rise like the moon
And I will shine like the sun
By LukeCoomer ©
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Hey dear poet brother LUKE!!..... powerful stuff you've laid down here...... oozing the type of confidence that created an Alexander The Great or a Ghandi.........love all the kick ass metaphors and unstoppable phrasing!!......ALL STARS!!...... great read my friend!!....... LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo. ♥
Tony
wowthanks for the encouragement
You produce such competent poetry designed to involve the reader and send "clear" messages !!
Wonderful phrasing and word choice means this poem stands out ! :)
Wishing you the very best !
Richard
wow yet again another great comment from another great poet thanks