Poem -
Love with Lonliness
Sometimes I feel to be always lonely..
Showering with tears and emptiness and only..
My pain and sorrows no one can understand..
Not even that God who is worshipes by man..
Why we live when we have to die...
This is the truth which people don't rely..
I hate to trust that merciless statue..
Who takes our love
And remains a selfish virtue..
My life is completed with only these words..
Lonliness and pain have surrounded my world..
Then I wish to get up..
And touch the latter heights..
But then I realize what am I doing..
When those heights are just a dreaming sights..
And then I feel to be always Lonely...
Showering with tears and emptiness only..!!
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Nice write,
But please tell this person her dreams are tomorrow.
Your friend Mark.x Take care Flower .
Heyy Mark..:)
thank you for your lovelyy comments..:) I'm pleased you liked it..and yeah surely the girl in the poem will try to think beyond this..sometimes life takes us to such situations that its too hard too get up..but still..i'll let her know..:)
Love
Surabhi
nice one deariee!
Heyy Sistaa..:)
thankss a lott..I just a lovee ur comments..!! :)
Congrats on your winning nomination
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thanks a lott Sir For your wishes...!!
Regards
Surabhi..:)
I could feel every word in this poem. It was a very touching write. Congratulations on your nomination sweetie!
Val ♥
Thank you soo much sweetheart.. :) I am really Happyy you loved it..!!
Lovee you always..!!
Surabhi
we came alone and go alone,this is a known truth which we deliberately forget ,just to enjoy this illusion of time.So make friendship with your best friend solitude,you will never feel lonely dear..Love all the poems i read.Good night
cheers
Piusha..
Yeahh your words are really true dear..!! I am trying to do the same..:) Thank you for stopping by and for giving a read to my poems..:)
Keep writing
Love
Surabhi
Sadness giving birth to a beautiful write
Emptiness transformed into a shared feeling
I was moved and greatful for the touch.
Surabhi I truly loved It.
Thank youu soo muchh for your kind words..!! I am really honoured to recieve such comments from you..:)
Glad you loved it..!
Keep wriitng
Regards
Surabhi
I love beautiful poems of sadness, I thought love and loneliness was amazing.
(Sometimes I feel to be sad and lonely showering with tears emptiness only) I cant tell you how BEAUTIFUL I think those two lines are. But i can tell you all day i've been repeating them. After reading your poem surabhi my heart was filled with your sadness
My only thought was, your need for and my need to give you a comforting hug. So im sending you one. ♥
Aww...!! Thank you soo muchh for this lovely comment...:)
I am glad it touched your heart in such a wonderful way...:)
Thank you for your love care support..foe understanding mee...:) And most of for your lovely hug..:)
Love
Surabhi