Poem -
Love Potion
Holding my breath, only to think of you
Those things you do, captivate me, make it all feel so new
Whisper in my ear, hold me tight
Kiss my skin, turn out the light
You know, eternity is waiting for you and me
A pair that was meant to be
"I love you", a simple notion
Take those words away, we are left with a love potion
Chemistry, a formula, however you may word it
A recipe for passion, I must admit
Exactly the same you and I, yet black and white
In the darkness, we find light
Relax, reveal your most desired emotion
Tonight, we make a new love potion
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Comments
Hey AMBER!!..... this has great rhythm in its heartbeat........ reminds me of the old band "Tears For Fears"........ it's got that groove...........I am a Mulatto man so that Black and White line made my curiosity climb and definitely had me hanging on ..........There's an old song called "People are People" that popped to mind as I read as well.......... hey, I'm a musician and I don't make this type of comment often.......i dunno........ just something about it!!.......... enjoyed............ smiles.........T xo
Hey Amber, I read this and picture you going through memories of what grows your love then adding ingredients into the pot were you brew your batches of love potions. Just letting imagination go free lol, I enjoyed.
Yes Devon, that's what I was going for, a mixture of memories and other things lol
Hey amber a killer write . Loved every line . I feel the tempo and the rhyming it is off the chain good. You have some talent . Very impressive write . Hugs to you rock
Thanks everyone
well done, Amber Legowski, a sweet simple poem with lots of heart; impossible not to like a write like this; no negative implications, just an old fashion love song....I enjoyed, cheers
Thank you Christopher for the sentiment
Nice to make your acquaintance flower girl. Thank you very much for reading my work. I'm glad you enjoyed