Poem -
Loves New Dawn
Slow feed my aching heartÂ
Which bleeds to feel lovedÂ
Sensual sweet blissÂ
Adorn your tender kissÂ
on my wanting lipsÂ
Cathartic gentle tonesÂ
Stroke my brittle bonesÂ
Soften my soulÂ
Weed out the thornsÂ
Let me feel rebornÂ
.......Love kindle a new dawn
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A very melodic touching piece , lovely read :) , I hope to read more of your work !
Thanks so much Chris, I look forward to discovering your work also :)
Please do ! I hope you find interesting & any feedback is welcome ! Have a nice evening ?
Gwen sweet without being sickly and poignant without being complacent.
Loved the beat and flow to this, it just hugs you and your final payoff line is this gemstone's touch of poetic class and is simply magical.
Thanks for writing and sharing something warming and greeting my friend.❤️
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Thanks Shaun, I think I was trying to move away from my darker writes here. So glad you felt the warmth in this piece. Many thanks for reading my works xÂ