Poem -
Lunar Queen
As warmth retreats and daylight dies,
Ascending into darkening skies...
Entrancing..,subdued Diana appears -,
Crescent goddess, illuminator of fears.
Apollo's sibling, she carries a bow-
Illustrious huntress,deleting her foe
In full circle gloom ,
She brings birthing to bloom -
Simulator of horror and lunatic tunes,
Intoxicating ions releases her fumes.
Minds enthralled with delusional doom -
High Tide of murder in an oceanic tomb
TĂŁmasik enchantment on a global stage,
A demonised advantage of the new lunar phase
Such is the influence of this queen, Diana -
Unrivalled, - even by the loved Dalai Lama.
Her radiance is closest to that of the sun...
Her dark spells on man... remains second to none!
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Greetings Vianca,
A very pretty and enchanting powerful tale of a queen of proud decent, to all things living and all things done and a lustful prey for many to be sought by all of mankind and bows to none, a powerful caption of pride and prestige in this poem,of this character, by its presenter...Very well written and a very lovely way of presenting this (Haiku), one of length and perfect rhyme.....You don't often see (Haiku's) with such rhymatic lengths,such as this one, that much but this one was great....
Warmest regards,
Jim
Hi there,Jim
Thanx so much for that detailed critique.I was pleasantly surprised to read it.
Much appreciated!
You speak the truthÂ
just look at the music nowaday's
All they do is worship fornication and lust
True real feeling is rare on the screen
nice poem
Thank you.Liam