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Make Me Or Break Me

Make Me Or Break Me

Sitting in my empty room,
Hoping that I'll see you soon, 
Imagining the moment that we meet, 
A moment nothing can beat...

But deep inside a worry hides, 
A worry that always resides, 
"Will you like me when you see, 
The mess I happen to be? 

Will you like me still when you hear, 
A voice unsure and tinged with fear? 
Will you like me when you've seen,
How, to myself, I'm truly mean? 

Will you take one look and leave, 
Leave me one more loss to grieve? 
Or will you stay, stay and love me, 
Help me through, bring out the best of me? 

Will you be my break in the rain, 
My cure for the pain? 
Will you want me despite my scars, 
Will you show me how there are always stars? 

You could make me, or break me, 
It's all up to what to you see, 
Can you, will you, try to be my light? 
For me, will you fight?"

All alone in my empty room, 
Hoping that you'll love me soon, 
Hoping you don't leave, but stay, 
And chase all of my fears away. 

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sparrowsong

Hello BowKitty...

This reminds me of a conversation I heard my Brothers having when their room was next to mine...

They talked loud enough so I didn't have to eavesdrop...

LOL!

They were talking about girls which would eventually put me to sleep...

One would say to the other...

She was cute...

The other one would say...

You date her then...

She has to many issues for me...

I want someone that isn't looking for a Psychiatrist...

LOL!

Great write! 

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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Jason Brown

Will you want me despite my scars,
Will you show me how there are always stars?

Our scars are the road map of our lives; they show us where we've been...not all those places were good...but they were part of our journey.

Anyone worthy of showing all your scars...will show you the stars!!

Beautiful piece. Great to see you posting again...my dear, sweet friend.

J xxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Michael O'Boyle

Congratulations on a fantastic piece! This was a wonderful read. I loved your words. Thanks for sharing. 

Michael O’Boyle 

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