Maladies of Magnitude

Maladies of Magnitude
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As I looked yon village over, scents of jasmine, whiffs of clover,
wafted deftly, drifting over—over verdant hills so green.
Had I known the deadly danger that awaited ev’ry stranger.
As I was, a roving ranger—yearned for sights set so serene.
Why, then, did it feel unclean?
Yonder there, in deepest valley; dare I go, or dillydally?
Wonderment, my soul did rally—rallied ‘round my fears of dread.
Dammit, man!–my soul stood screaming–waiting here is not redeeming;
what I’d find there, so unseeming; unprepared was I, instead.
Townsfolk stood—eyes white, as dead.
Feelings of unease assailed me; what insanity now ailed me?
Had my sanity now failed me—failed me as it had before?
None within the village proper moved about, save one lone pauper.
“Come now, sir, see what's in store." With skin as black as aigremore;
arms reached out, blistered and sore…
As I stood there gasping, wheezing, it grew cold, I shivered, freezing;
there was nothing nice or pleasing in this vile Devil's den.
Tho' I sensed he longed to help me, I winced once, he flinched quite plainly.
When I uttered, “most ungainly…” eyes rolled back, he scratched his chin.
I'd been blinded by my sin.
On my bare skin, lesions fester—still I laugh; an insane jester.
Now I must but die and rest here—rest here in sad solitude.
Had I known what would befall me, would adventure e’er have called me?
Trap'd here now, disease has walled me; like the pauper whom I'd shooed.
Maladies of magnitude.
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Blind d by my sin, nicely said! What makes the criminal so evil is when his sin cloaks his consciousness. I am not sure if you thought of this but your thoughts remind me of some pillars of criminology
Yes, I did somewhat, Greg, and I thank you for asking.
Thank you as well for reading and sharing your insights on this poem.
I am very grateful for your input.
Have a fantastic week ahead.
~Dean
Great stuff Dean. I love the lyrical quality in this! ???
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and comment, Keith. I sincerely appreciate you as well as your time.
Take care, and thanks again.
~Dean
Brilliant outstanding write Dean. 5 stars x
I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on this, Ru T.
I'm very glad you enjoyed the poem.
~Dean :)
awesome Dean you have such superb talent
Well, it sure does mean a lot to me that you feel that way, poetessdarkly.
Thanks so much for reading and commenting on this poem. I deeply appreciate it.
~Dean <3
This is a magnificent piece of work Dean! I have read it aloud 3 times now and each time I find something new in it! ..I am fascinated by the phrasing -which in simple terms ..really works! and works incrediby well.! Good work sir!
Thanks so much for reading and commenting, lodigiana. I deeply appreciate your input and I'm really glad you enjoyed the poem.
Hugs!
~Dean
I love this
Thank you, Alyssa.
I am really glad you enjoyed it.
Happy Valentine's Day to you & yours,
~Dean ❤️